Life is a canvas, a vast landscape
There are no rules at all except those you create.
And here you give birth to some part of your soul
something you feel, something you know
You colour your world with its hues and its shades
A world full of love, a world full of hate
You are the artist, the painter, the obbsessive sculptor
The dreamer, the visionary, the bold creator.
You who creates and destroys at your whim
This fragile life so paper thin
Shape me a world so full of colour
For this pot of clay is like no other
Show me a feeling, a thought or an act
Then make something else
And never look back
This life is yours can't you see?
So paint me a picture with all your good deeds
Because here in this world we are what we see
And all of your dreams, all of them, here are set free
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Author:
Saxon Crow (
Offline) - Published: June 13th, 2021 00:46
- Comment from author about the poem: Meh.... A work in progress
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Lovely words 🙂 I liked reading this . We are the artists .. the creators ... maybe so ..
But sometimes it’s difficult to feel we can create what we want ... and sometimes life isn’t the way we want it to be ,
I think we all need to feel empowered and strong enough to create what we want
Thanks. I believe we create what we need, even when we aren't conscious of it. The point being take responsibility for your life.
That art improves with the experience of life 'til that time when you can paint your dreams.
Andy
We alrwady paint them. Time and experience gives us more expertise i reckon.... Or not.
Lovely poem. So true.
Thank you
Good write SC.
Thanks Orchi
A work in progress? Looks complete to me - Some good lines in there.
Thabks for the support Dave. Just doesnt feel right. Know what i mean?
No I don't actually - I'm not the author. Only you can know (I modify sometimes) it's your opinion and in this instance you will change it and get it right to your satisfaction, I'm sure.
.. there seems to be something of a theme running through MPS today ..
I love a good theme ... nice one SC ..
Yeah i noticed that as well lol
When we all realize that we, individually, are all artists, as has your post shown us here, maybe we will excel to create a masterpiece ourselves
That's the only true purpose, in the end.
Good write, S.C.
Astute observation noticed that on several occasions; our poetic thesis match. ????
Hi Jerry many thanks, and yes ive noticed that as well
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