Overcome

Neville

Overcome

 

As the pulsing quickened

each tiny pearl of salt laden lotion shifted

and swirled, in a perfectly decreasing cyclic motion

 

 then they paused to gasp and to sigh

as their muscles did clench, release and again tighten

they each rode the same waves until both were sublimely overcome ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 13th, 2021 06:49
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Saxon Crow

    It's hot out there already without you turning up the heat Nev!

    • Neville



      Yes, I'm melting here as well ... cheese n local cider in the garden methinks this eve ... but need hop in the shower before then ... cheers SC ... šŸ™‚

    • dusk arising

      Disgracefully good!

      You've phrased this so well here to take your reader on their own sensual journey without revealing a thing. You're at it again pesky Neville.

      • Neville



        ............... that'll do ever so nicely ... thank you sir & kindly šŸ™‚

      • orchidee

        I'm a dark horse. I'm rushing to meet her! lol.

        • Neville



          ............. take it easy .. pace ya self otherwise the only rush ya gonna get is either

          1) straight to your head
          or
          2) straight to the hospital

          ............ other than that, enjoy šŸ™‚

        • Fay Slimm.

          Sensually as any and hotter than this scorching Sunday - - ah yes - I remember it well................x

          • Neville



            ............. Bless you dear friend Fay .. some things just can't be forgot .. can they not šŸ™‚ x

          • SureshG

            After reading several of your recent posts, I have come to a conclusion that Iā€™m jealous of you, your experiences and your talent.

            • Neville



              .................................... please dont be jealous suresh ... I have a very good imagination thats all ... šŸ™‚

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Hot write, Neville.

              • Neville



                ... It would probably sound too corny if I was to suggest I am overjoyed ... cheers tho' JR n truly ..

              • Doggerel Dave

                Wot? Hot over there? Winter here, hasn't got over 20 degrees C all week. Too cold to do much.... Could do an Oates I suppose.....not ready to go yet....

                • Neville



                  ..... thank you for considering these words DD ... always appreciated sir ...

                • Goldfinch60

                  Clever and intriguing write Neville.

                  Andy

                  • Neville



                    ............................ bless ya GF60 .. šŸ™‚

                  • L. B. Mek

                    'each tiny pearl of salt laden lotion shifted
                    and swirled, in a perfectly decreasing cyclic motion'
                    oh, ok - yeah, that
                    erm, washing machine
                    tumble and bubble, and its contents
                    instinctive friction
                    of pulsating, spontaneous symphony
                    a replayed metaphorical rendition
                    of their owners
                    once skin-tingling: mutually symbiotic attraction
                    as their serendipity's, beginning..
                    (funtastically, funtabolously
                    ...erm, fun?)..
                    A steamy read, you know
                    for us who like a bit of washing machine
                    vivacious: tremble...
                    Ahem! lol

                    • Neville



                      ................................. a very respectable thank you is on its way L.B ...

                    • Dove

                      Lotion Motion! Very sensual, was it the tanning lotion , or was it the motion afterwards lol

                      • Neville



                        ................. thanks for sticking with me throughout my friend .................. šŸ™‚



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