In spite of your silence, I'm still able to hear your eloquent speech between the lines of your hissing breath.
In spite of your inherent uncertainty, I'm still able to feel your unshakable belief in me.
In spite of your deep rooted fears, I'm still able to find a safe haven amid the turbulent pulse of your heart.
In spite of the mystifying mournfulness of your eyes, I'm still able to find my joyful happiness resides in them.
In spite of your tormenting feeling of detachment away from this world, I'm still feel indescribable feeling of belong and connection in your spacious heart.
In spite of your unavoidable walk amid your misty roads, I'm still able to see the gorgeous sunrise looming over our distant horizon.
In spite of your inexhaustible sad tears, I'm still able to see them watering the wastelands of my desolate deserts.
In spite of the lifelong pains of your outcast soul, I'm still able to feel indescribable relief whenever I seek refuge amid your life-giver hug.
In spite of my inevitable demise, I'm still able to enjoy a perpetual life whenever my existence unites with your presence.
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Samer Amin (
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Mysterious write, Samer.
Reminds me of "Long Black Veil" a Kentucky folk poem written from a dead mans point of view.
Thank you Jerry for your great notes, I really miss these witty notes so much.
Indeed, in these lines I have tried to delve deeper into the mysterious spiritual connection between lovers and more specifically the perfect harmony between them which is generally called “soul mates”.
In these verses I tried to highlight the idea of this mutual harmony as a kind of mutual reinforcement and endorsement.
Not only because of the psychological traits we share in common between us and our loved ones, but it may also be because of some kinds of polar opposites that can give us unfathomable spiritual harmony that can defy any logical or psychological explanation.
In spite of your not being on here for a while your words say so much.
Andy
Thank you so much Andy, I really miss all of you so much.
In spite of all the abundant miracles
we bypass daily
we still squabble, fervently
about all that meaningless, improbability
that may, visit our path
threatening to distort
our very perception: of fact...
(glad to see you back posting)
an inquisitive write
and a 'faithful' dedication, simultaneously
thanks for sharing
Thank you very much first for your wise introduction, and second for your encouraging feedback.
Love the each and every lines .❤
A proper soul mate can make the earth heaven for us. 🙃
I am waiting for my soul mate! 😄
Thank you very much for your encouraging and motivating feedback.
I liked the phrase, "A proper soul mate can make the earth heaven for us."
This is very true, and I would also like to stress the importance of your word 'proper' in this sentence, because a 'mismatch' can turn our earthly life into an utterly tormenting hellfire.
You are waiting for your soul mate and you should also believe that she is waiting for you in the same way.
🙃
Beautiful poem . I like your choice of words . The soul can say do much ... the link between two people can be so strong sometimes
Thank you very much for your encouraging words!
In fact, I have seriously tried to emphasize the idea of wordless communication between soulmates and the mysterious and unfathomable spiritual communication between the two of them.
Whether they share many common personality traits or even may share an opposite trait, the mysterious and unfathomable spiritual relationships are ''Still'' able to bridge any obstacles in communication and make them in mutual lasting harmony forever and ever, and this is in my humble opinion the definition of the term "soul mate".
Yes , I agree . The link is there , regardless . Just like with twin flames ... I believe “ twin flames “ are the strongest soul connection , but soulmates still share a strong connection .
You are welcome 🙂
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