Oh she was a beauty alright
she knew how to move it.
Casually walkin on a carpet
of the tongues hangin out
along the sidewalk.....
and i swear she must have had a
stoplight hanging out of her ass,
cos the traffic was in chaos man.
So what did she see in me?
I tell you, i really couldnt tell ya.
It sure wasn't the cut of my cloth
nor the bulge of my billfold.
But i guess she never smelled the
bullshit when my mouth was open.
- Author: dusk arising ( Offline)
- Published: June 17th, 2021 01:32
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Comments5
You'll set Fido off barking, with no 18+ marker! lol.
Fido's eyes are wide open m8.
Another potential failed relationship then d a.
Andy
This was a half dozen pretty young things who knew it rolled into one from forty odd years ago mate.
(your words inspired
my feeble effort of a reply, below
and for that, I wholeheartedly and humbly
thank you! dear poet)..
'or, she simply chose to believe, foolishly maybe
there's more to you
than that pitiful minimum, you project to the world
and is attempting to project, into your horizon
promise: of what better future she can offer;
so that misery worshiping self-loathing, you harbour
because you've decided, you've seen it all already
and you wont ever let another ignite those ashes
of gravely breath's, embers
to only end-up, once more - bereft
left grappling with that cold embrace
of belated failure's: enraged regret;
no, just maybe: she's willingly choosing to believe
that she may have - enough, to overcome
your shattered heart
because, in you: she gleans a path
towards salvaging, her own broken heart...!'
Self loathingh? Dream on.
Ooo!
Indeed, wear sunshades in her dazzling company.
Strange write, Dusk.
Women do all the choosing, why is a wonderful mystery.
They know what they want and when theyre young and beautiful its mostly attention they desire. LOL If they can put all males into one bag we can of course gladly reciprocate cant we.
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