dusk arising

alive in life


giving you
all i could
and taking
all you offered
I cried for you
lied for you
worked this
aching body
for you
begged of you
learned from you
and you pulled
me through
loved for you
brought new life
to you
and still
there is
i wouldn't do
for you
for the
love of you
runs through me
through and through


  • Teddy.15

    Very clever this one, I read it a couple of times. Even on the worst of days we should all just embrace this life that we have.

  • Jerry Reynolds

    Good write, Dusk.
    Exactly what it's like.

  • Saxon Crow

    I like this one a lot. Reminds me of Depeche mode

  • Maxine Smith

    I engaged more and more with each line. Great flow, great meaning, great write.

  • orchidee

    A fine write dusk.

  • Goldfinch60

    So vert true d a, the love of life is so wonderful and must be lived to the full.


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