The Final Breath

ravale

I hope my final breath 

Carries no woeful regret,

Leaving as light as a feather

Not heavy with pressure. 

 

May it be one with the wind, 

Forever moving and free;

Representing a life of glee

As pure as one can be. 

 

I hope my final breath

Carries no woeful regret,

A life unlived and far from acceptance,

And final breaths leaving in reluctance. 

  • Author: ravale (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 18th, 2021 07:44
  • Category: Spiritual
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Comments3

  • dusk arising

    Accepting a final breath will come as we transit is a signal of your own inner strength and acceptance of reality.
    Few among us will be regarded as having moved the world one step on whereas we all live our existence as the world moves and we all depart with the world bustling on around us.

  • Doggerel Dave

    I agree with every line of that - and have mentioned my impending end on several occasions here. I don't make it an obsession beyond the hope I go quietly.

  • Goldfinch60

    That final breath will carry not regret but will take your happiness to another place.

    Andy



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