First man I ever met,
the one who taught me
to step and throw.
When to be heard, when
to shut up, and never
talk past the close.
- Author: Jerry Reynolds ( Offline)
- Published: June 20th, 2021 07:24
- Comment from author about the poem: Happy Fathers Day
- Category: Special occasion
- Views: 25
- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, L. B. Mek
Comments9
A fine write for your Dad Jerry.
Thanks, A.P.
Good write Jerry.
Fathers Day in UK too!
Thanks, Orchi.
That is a great tribute Jerry. Very masculine.
Thanks, Dusk and for noticing.
He had a quite strength.
Awesome Dad poem Jerry
Thanks, S.C.
Our character is the reflection of our dad...🙂
Thanks, Ali.
Yes a good Dad sets the pace of a child's future outlook = thanks for this grateful tribute on Father's Day Jerry
Thanks, Fay.
Yes, so true Jerry.
Andy
a fine man I am sure ... a fine write too sir ..
Thanks, Neville.
this is when your style shines, Jerry
incisively acute, frugal word choices
making metaphorical incisions in our memories
to unravel and awaken, those untameable: emotions...
Brilliant, in its unassuming simplicity
of accessibly worded relatability!
thank you
Much appreciated, L.B.
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