The snow fell softly, gently,
On her bare legs and feet.
She was very still, very quiet,
And I heard the blood beating in my ears.
The wind blew and snowflakes flew,
A thousand tiny teeth to bite me through,
Till all that laid between us was white,
A world of nothing but snow.
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Author:
Whirlpool (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I found her a step too late. I stood for a long time there, as the snow buried her away.
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Very emotive words Whirlpool.
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Thank you very much! I enjoy the sites one per day rule. I think it's great for routine and will be reading and writing lots on here.
Welcome to mps. Grest first poem here
Thank you very much for the welcome! Looking forward to reading and writing here.
such a smooth flow
uniquely voiced, its lack of context
adds-to rathe than: distracts-from, I think
wonderfully creative, thanks for sharing
Thank you! I usually like to write poems short, long ones are imo very hard to write. I admire writers who can smoothly compose long poems.
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