Pandemia

Neville

Pandemia

 

Elusive as woodsmoke

Impossible

to grasp, catch or cage ..

The depth of night sky

deep

but surely, close to God ..

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  • orchidee

    A poignant write N.
    I'm off to meet one of them lasses now. Will it be too much for me?! lol.

    • Neville



      maybe .. thanks tho'

    • Goldfinch60

      True Neville.

      • Neville



        thanks GF60 ........... always appreciated sir n truly

      • dusk arising

        That's how the night sky makes you feel isn't it. Especially on those clear frosty nights when all the stars are visible. How insignificant i become faced with all that.
        You post is like all the questions 'why' compacted into a few lines.

        • Neville



          thanks DA .. writ whilst watching summer lightening ... have you ever witnessed anything so awesome? I have only ever seen it twice ............................................

        • Saxon Crow

          Another genius bit of poetry Nev

          • Neville



            you are far too kind SC but of course muchly appreciated, I can tell ya 🙂

          • L. B. Mek

            a small glimpse of your True poetic depth
            we get to glean in this Poem, my friend
            as you subtly and brilliantly juxtaposition
            that insistently prevalent - archaic mindset, where:
            in the bleakness of night
            when despair blows-out, hope's light
            gripped by our incessant need, of all-things pandemic
            that we gravitate towards, for being dramatically chaotic
            we finally realise, that hidden potential for greatness
            in all that we utilise to survive and stubbornly: Thrive...!
            and there-in, exists that unwavering mythology
            of innate belief, in our capacity to mimic
            what godliness of flesh: we can yet, realise!
            (Such depth of versatility
            you showcase consistently, dear poet
            Two great poems from you today
            each, so drastically different
            in style and tone, what a poetic treat)
            Brilliant!
            in my humble opinion

            • Neville



              My word, that'll do nicely my friend .. and then some ..
              Thank you L.B

              Neville

            • Fay Slimm.

              This anthem to night's cavalcade of stars humble the senses if like me these few words evoke memories of dark sky lit with myriads of winking wonder - -- beautiful .......... x

              • Neville



                ........ I am honoured you should think it so my dear friend ..................................many thank Q's dear Fay .... x

              • Laura🌻

                Neville,

                A brilliant write.
                I sincerely liked it.

                Thank you for sharing.

                Laura🌻

                • Neville



                  ... Thank you kindly my friend .. 🌻

                • Accidental Poet

                  The night sky so mesmerizing as are your words N. ; )

                  • Neville



                    You are way too kind my friend ... many thank you's n true ... 🙂

                  • SureshG

                    “depth of night sky” a phrase imagination to stir
                    Beautifully writ

                    • Neville



                      ... How very kind, thank you sir ... N 🙂



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