Pandemia
Elusive as woodsmoke
Impossible
to grasp, catch or cage ..
…
The depth of night sky
deep
but surely, close to God ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Laura🌻, Accidental Poet
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A poignant write N.
I'm off to meet one of them lasses now. Will it be too much for me?! lol.
maybe .. thanks tho'
True Neville.
thanks GF60 ........... always appreciated sir n truly
That's how the night sky makes you feel isn't it. Especially on those clear frosty nights when all the stars are visible. How insignificant i become faced with all that.
You post is like all the questions 'why' compacted into a few lines.
thanks DA .. writ whilst watching summer lightening ... have you ever witnessed anything so awesome? I have only ever seen it twice ............................................
Another genius bit of poetry Nev
you are far too kind SC but of course muchly appreciated, I can tell ya 🙂
a small glimpse of your True poetic depth
we get to glean in this Poem, my friend
as you subtly and brilliantly juxtaposition
that insistently prevalent - archaic mindset, where:
in the bleakness of night
when despair blows-out, hope's light
gripped by our incessant need, of all-things pandemic
that we gravitate towards, for being dramatically chaotic
we finally realise, that hidden potential for greatness
in all that we utilise to survive and stubbornly: Thrive...!
and there-in, exists that unwavering mythology
of innate belief, in our capacity to mimic
what godliness of flesh: we can yet, realise!
(Such depth of versatility
you showcase consistently, dear poet
Two great poems from you today
each, so drastically different
in style and tone, what a poetic treat)
Brilliant!
in my humble opinion
My word, that'll do nicely my friend .. and then some ..
Thank you L.B
Neville
This anthem to night's cavalcade of stars humble the senses if like me these few words evoke memories of dark sky lit with myriads of winking wonder - -- beautiful .......... x
........ I am honoured you should think it so my dear friend ..................................many thank Q's dear Fay .... x
Neville,
A brilliant write.
I sincerely liked it.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
... Thank you kindly my friend .. 🌻
The night sky so mesmerizing as are your words N. ; )
You are way too kind my friend ... many thank you's n true ... 🙂
“depth of night sky” a phrase imagination to stir
Beautifully writ
... How very kind, thank you sir ... N 🙂
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