Insistence

Fay Slimm.

 

Insistence.

 

Dawn hangs on the trees, force slivers floorward,
slips into sleep's acres,
turns shade to tailgates of light over which rays
snipe at quiescence
before sunrise insistence moves bleary dreamers
to wide-away doers.

 

Ears mistake sleepy whispers for proactive reality
when shaken mind rouses
to sense present infinity ticking away rest- time
making the richer
seconds remaining for flight's drowsy treasure as
night hooks day to my use.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 21st, 2021 11:32
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  • dusk arising

    Wakey - wakey ! As the world awakens. Another pearl of poetry from our lady of the dawn Fay.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ha ha -- - am usually an early riser Dusk - unless my pen takes me into and past midnight - then words evade me until after that first cuppa coffee - your comments however are always so welcomed my friend.

    • Neville


      .. Make no mistake, You have such a way with words my Lady ..

      .. wish I was ya pen .................. x

      • Fay Slimm.

        Ha - no joke - I have recently been wanting to change my pen - but you may have to consider again that wish my dear Sir Knight - - cos my pen lands in all sorts of odd places when Muse becomes lively - such as between my lips (retracted of course) - or twiddling the curls around my ears - or worse still inside the top of - - - well 'nuff said - - however big smiles and thank yous as ever mon ami for your very welcome support .............. x

      • orchidee

        Good write Fay.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Thanking you Orchi my friend.

        • Saxon Crow

          Another exquisite piece Fay

          • Fay Slimm.

            You are so kind S.C. to say the least and am delighted you liked my pot of Insistence.

          • Goldfinch60

            More wonderful words Fay.

            ARE YOU AWAKE YET!!!!!! - LOL

            Andy

            • Fay Slimm.

              Hhhhmmm -- yawn -- yes now I read your kind wake-up call my eyes are opening on this glorious day dear Andy - thank you for your kind visit and wishing you a wonderful day too.

            • SureshG

              That brief moment between sleep and waking up, is most intense, as are these words of yours

              • Fay Slimm.

                Ah - your comment sums it up well - and agree that the moments of waking are very special Suresh -- many thanks for your welcome visit to read Insistence.



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