A Little Point of Fact Maybe
… Who dare love the sky, more fully than thee
Corncrakes and Kittyhawk’s
Each dare love the sky, more fully than thee …
- Author: Neville ( Offline)
- Published: June 24th, 2021 04:30
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A Little Point of Fact Maybe
… Who dare love the sky, more fully than thee
Corncrakes and Kittyhawk’s
Each dare love the sky, more fully than thee …
Comments8
A fine write N.
You met more lasses?!
Yep ... and You? .................... Cheers n truly Mr. O 🙂
Nice. Can't beat a lapwing either. The spitfire of the sky.
Great poem Nev 🙂
Funny you should mention the good old peewit or green plover sir Crow .. I have written about the lapwing before now ... and methinks it is somewhere here on MPS ... cheers mate 🙂
Lovely Nev. - Romantic lines again from your tender pen methinks - -- stating that even sky's expanse cannot be more broad or deep than love which the heart feels for a much cherished lady. - - twas using the Olde English of "thee" did it for me - - - sighingly - - - Fay.........x
then I shall thank thee and truly dear lady Fay .... 🙂
LOL I suppose that means i love the highway more than does the kittyhawk?
Or shall i read..... who loves sex more than the sexy?
Love and lovers....Scrubbing and scrubbers?
.............. I dunno for sure, but then .. who the hell really cares these days .......................... cheers DA 🙂
More than a good write, Neville.
Love, birds, and flying machines.
.. Ha.. me too mate .. and thanks for the thumbs up JR .. 🙂
Good words Neville, that love of the sky is catching.
Andy
it most certainly is .. I hope ... and thanks for drawing attention to it Andy 🙂
Oohh, I must meet some of these lasses. I can't live without them. Oh, I don't care - gonna let me hair down, be a dark horse, etc, etc!
Notice the mad moment of wild abandon from me? Keep taking the tablets, you say?! heehee.
... letting your hair down sounds like a good idea to me ... let it down and shake it loose .. smile but don't mention swooning .. ladies like to think that's their prerogative 🙂
... cheers Mr. O 🙂
engrossing, for such a short write
by tantalisingly teasing us, with just enough detail
to force us, into a googling escapade
we've learnt to fish-out, those contextual secrets
to your meaningful poetry's: soaring lessons..
a write, worthy of adorning the side
of the Wright Flyer, in my humble opinion..
what a fun treat, of a read!
thank you my friend
thanks L.B ...................... 🙂
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