Rejection

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  dusk arising June 27th, 2021 14:57

  SElf chastisement eh?

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    Jerry ReynoldsJune 27th, 2021 16:19

    Thanks, Dusk.
    It works out that way sometimes. Maybe next time.

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  Goldfinch60 June 28th, 2021 00:34

  "Fetch it boy, fetch it".
  
  Andy

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    Jerry ReynoldsJune 28th, 2021 08:40

    Thanks, Andy.
    Not a fetch dog.

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  Neville June 28th, 2021 03:30

  
  .. go on, beat ya self up why don't ya ..
  we all admire and enjoy wot you post ..
  although, to be honest, I dont think that is one of your concerns at all .. I do think however, you are darn good at this particular poetic genre ..
  Neville 🙂
  

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    Jerry ReynoldsJune 28th, 2021 08:44

    Thanks, Neville.
    You are correct, I do not concern myself with it much. Just pick up and move on.

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  L. B. Mek June 28th, 2021 06:53

  yup, I can so relate to this poignant wording
  of Poetically brunt and unfiltered truth
  in our somewhat warped valuation of Art, Jerry..
  and then, those splinters - that dig deep
  under our thin layer of bruised - skin
  lingering to torment, us
  with unrealistically ambitious mirages
  of self-doubting inadequacy's: futile musings...

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    Jerry ReynoldsJune 28th, 2021 08:48

    Thanks, L.B.
    Thought I would share a spontaneous moment with other splintered sprits.

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    L. B. MekJune 29th, 2021 02:07

    'splintered sprits.'
    beautiful, reads a like a 'foreshadowing': title
    to one of your penetrative shorty's, maybe? lol
    thanks Jerry