the day is dark

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  orchidee June 28th, 2021 09:06

  A fine write dusk.
  It was a bit dark for me too - until I switched the light on! heehee.

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  Fay Slimm. June 28th, 2021 09:39

  There is a lot of that battle about in these worrisome days my friend - a remedy for dark moods is to play your kind of music - so cool Mr D -and thanks for sharing it.

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  Saxon Crow June 28th, 2021 10:36

  Use a torch to find your way
  Open the curtains by the bay
  Let the worries fade away
  As light fills the room with the carefree day
  
  Dark days always come but they also go.
  A good sombre poem Dusk. Know that feeling well!
  

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  Goldfinch60 June 29th, 2021 00:31

  Hope will always overcome fear as those hopes will become reality.
  
  Andy

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  L. B. Mek June 29th, 2021 03:34

  dear, oh - so gifted poet
  Emily Dickinson lived and wrote in a time
  far removed from us, near 1850's
  and yet, she too - somewhat by choice
  lived her life, in a manner
  that your words, so succinctly describe:
  'The day is dark,
  curtains remain drawn.
  Worry fills the place
  where a light shone brightly.
  Day grows long
  as hope battles fear.'
  and yet, she managed
  to pen such a fitting reply to your poem
  nearly two hundreds years ago, and it reads:
  'Presentiment is that long shadow on the lawn
  Indicative that suns go down;
  The notice to the startled grass
  That darkness is about to pass.'
  ain't Poetry just an amazingly surreal realm, to experience?
  thank you, Dusk - simply Brilliant!
  https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-8822