Untitled - XLVI

SureshG

Untitled - XLVI

06/28/2021

 

comma,

the story continues

  • Author: SureshG (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 29th, 2021 00:13
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, dusk arising
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  • Goldfinch60

    Question mark?
    When?

    Andy

  • Saxon Crow

    Exclamation!
    Why?

  • orchidee

    Good write M.

  • L. B. Mek

    and we fight on: regardless, knowing
    our full-stop of inevitability
    allows us no room, for self-pitying wastefulness...
    poetically, stylistically a stimulating short-shorty, lol
    really like your thought provoking
    raw and minimalist, uniquely intuitive
    delivery of surgically incisive poetry,
    thank you dear poet!

  • SureshG

    It is one of the two most potent punctuations, but the one that keeps the story alive.
    Thanks for your in-depth comment

  • dusk arising

    Ah yes the much misused and abused comma.....
    .....every other breath of our life a comma, and life, our story, goes on.

    Superb and brave post from you today. Deserving of a place among my favourites.

  • SureshG

    As life goes on, after a comma, we have a means to change the direction. I greatly appreciate your input.

  • Neville



    ... very clever sir ; you are almost too clever when it comes to this 😉

  • SureshG

    ….you mean for my own good. I totally agree. BTW, you are too generous with your comments, though much appreciated

  • Neville


    I just added a like for no other reason than I can and I do ...

    • SureshG

      The first for me, so thanks



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