ashes awayfinal resting placeriver decides
.. I can not explain just how good this is and I'm usually not too bad with words ..
Thanks, Neville.
Good write Jerry.
Thanks, Orchi.
Succinct, no reason to elaborate Well penned, my friend
Thanks, M.S.
That wil certainly be true in my case, I have asked that my ashes be discarded onto My River- but not yet. Andy
That was my sisters request as well she loved the Rappahannock.
Excellent three liner which powerfully takes us into beyondness - thanks Jerry..
Thanks, Fay.
Perfect!
Thanks, S.C.
into the vast unknown.... beyond us a resting place for all the questions A great three liner Jerry.
Thanks, Dusk.
that river of Time, I guess where we shall forever exist as long, as existence chooses to remain: timeless.. another wonderful shorty Jerry measured, yet inspiring - as ever thank you!
Thanks, L.B.
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.. I can not explain just how good this is and I'm usually not too bad with words ..
Thanks, Neville.
Good write Jerry.
Thanks, Orchi.
Succinct, no reason to elaborate
Well penned, my friend
Thanks, M.S.
That wil certainly be true in my case, I have asked that my ashes be discarded onto My River- but not yet.
Andy
That was my sisters request as well she loved the Rappahannock.
Excellent three liner which powerfully takes us into beyondness - thanks Jerry..
Thanks, Fay.
Perfect!
Thanks, S.C.
into the vast unknown.... beyond us
a resting place for all the questions
A great three liner Jerry.
Thanks, Dusk.
that river of Time, I guess
where we shall forever exist
as long, as existence
chooses to remain: timeless..
another wonderful shorty Jerry
measured, yet inspiring - as ever
thank you!
Thanks, L.B.
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