High up
among those topmost branches
where leaves
gently swim in peaceful breeze
there
you'll find my thoughts these days
kissed
by magic otherworldliness
suspended
carefree 'neath clouds majesty
released
eased from shackles of frustration
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Really like this Dusk
you'll find my thoughts these days
kissed
by magic otherworldliness
Sheer poetry
So very true, I am there with you d a.
Andy
There is truly no better place to be for receiving peace my dear friend - - I am with you in spirit under those leaves of otherworldly magic.
Good write dusk.
........ the perfect title ... precision pruned sublimely cool, refreshing and so comfortably chilled ..............
what healing words, Dusk
sometimes our metaphors
need not be that gushingly positive
for them to effect and widen
our narrowed/limited outlooks/perceptions
sometimes, they just need to be true
so we know, we're not the only ones
feeling like we are..
a great read! thank you
Beautiful
Good read, Dusk.
A great place to be, in those trees.
Free as a leaf. Lovely phrasing. At this moment I am looking at the top leaves of a tree swimming in a peaceful breeze Thank you for the wonderful imagery
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