All the Best Words
When all his best words were taken
Teased apart, twisted and broken
He knew then, there was nowhere to hide
…
When all his best words had been written
Examined, considered, copied and forsaken
He knew there would be no more light
…
When all his best words were spoken
Sung, whispered, screamed and then shouted
He knew then, he must learn how to fight
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When all his best words were stolen
Torn apart, twisted, bled dry and finally crushed
He knew that the end was in sight
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Very insightful words Neville.
Andy
Cheers Andy ... am glad I got it off me chest sir .... Neville
Words are invaluable compared to fighting but can bring their own troubles when misheard or interpreted - love your lively bisecting in this fine example of word-skill dear Nev..........x
Hello my dear Fay .. thanks for being in my corner my friend n truly .. x
Sounds like someone about to hear me sing! heehee. 'The end was in sight'!
You met more gals lately? Should I meet them too?!
I have as a matter of fact, but you can have the lot if ya promise to keep your lips sealed ..
Plagiarism and aggressive misinterpretation rampant, Neville?
Time to abandon ship…..
I feel very strongly about plagiarism .. some seem to make a career out of it ... and if necessary, I shall go down with the ship ... but thanks for throwing me a line 🙂
reads like a prophetic epitaph, for me?
or am I deluded in thinking, one will be written
for a subtle blinked existence, like me...
still, kinda scary how uncanny
our connection reveals itself to be, my friend
how thankful I am, of that good fortune
that introduced me, to your sublime Poetry!
you are certainly not deluded L.B ... and I am most grateful to the good fortune you refer to too my fine literary Friend ...
It’s selfish to take work as ones own when it isn’t . A good expressive poem )
.... Thank you yellowrose .. a welcome and much appreciated visit and truly ...
Good write, Neville.
Thank you Jerry ..
Waiting for more best words from you. May I borrow a few from you?
... thank you kindly for entering into the spirit of things m&m a most appreciated visit and truly 🙂
You may look, but dont dare touch ............................................ even me comma's are copywritten write ... N
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