come

dusk arising



Come with me,
hold my hand,
I need the closeness,
human compassion.
Let us venture
to a place I go alone.
The place where
peace should dwell
but has been corrupted
by fear of the unknown.
Where aches, fears
and misgivings
fill the peaceful day.
Seek not to reassure me,
just hold my hand a while.

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 3rd, 2021 00:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this trying to put myself into the mindframe of someone I know. But in writing it I realise it is applicable to all of us at one time or another as we travel our own path through life and negotiate the bumps and pitfalls along the way.\r\n
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  • Caring dove

    Human touch ... is so important . Just someone to give you comfort

    • dusk arising

      There was an old song by the Four Tops called Reach Out. Which is what we all should do when those times of need come to us. Thanks Yellowrose.

      That song is worth a listen by the way.

      • Caring dove

        I had a hug with my twin sister the other day ... it felt so nice . I think a 30 second hug is supposed to release a feel good hormone .. aswell

        I will look for the song

      • Saxon Crow

        Beautiful poem Dusk. Beautiful and faved

      • Michael Edwards

        We all need someone to hold our hands from time to time - super write.

      • orchidee

        A fine write dusk.
        Were you saying 'Come away to a place where Orchi's not singing'?! heehee.

        • dusk arising

          Sing that old Beatles song Orchi....I wanna hold your hand.

        • Neville



          just being there is often just what the doctor ordered isn't it ... just the ticket sir .... N

          • dusk arising

            Yes, there are times when its just the right thing.

          • AuburnScribbler

            I am glad that you've written this dusk arising, as it reminds us that although we have a brain to think, we also have a heart to feel.

            We are not robots, we are humans, and we need to keep in touch; to hold on to both a sense of belonging, and a sense of general happiness too.

            Thank you for sharing, bravo, and I hope that all is well!



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