The Fairies Cast A Spell- Triolet

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  dusk arising July 6th, 2021 12:55

  Initially this appears quite simple in it's beauty but it's very cleverly composed too.

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    DoveJuly 6th, 2021 13:09

    Yes, it’s simplistic but a Triolet has a set pattern!
    Thanks for stopping by Dusk

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    dusk arisingJuly 6th, 2021 13:12

    I didn't know that Dove. I have no education in poetry and often find myself caught out LOL. Anyway, I think the whole is a beautiful poem and now i have re-read it I'm going to put it in my favourites.

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  Neville July 6th, 2021 13:04

  
  
  I have tried a lot of different poetic forms in my time but am amazed at just how many you have posted here .. never tried a triolet before tho'
  A fun post and like DA has indicated, not as easy as one might imagine ..
  I love it when you put in an appearance me duck 🙂
  

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    DoveJuly 6th, 2021 13:13

    Thanks Neville, it’s my first Triolet! I am pleased with the beauty! I’m trying different
    formats! Eventually I’ll get back to my own poetry style! Which consist of pentameter
    and abab rhyming ! Thanks for your support
    
    

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  Fay Slimm. July 6th, 2021 14:54

  Lovely and very dainty triolet dear Dove - -- love the colours too.

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    DoveAugust 7th, 2021 08:09

    Thank you kindly dear Fay! Much appreciated

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  Doggerel Dave July 6th, 2021 19:01

  Thanks Dove. That had something of the flavor of folk clubs I frequented long ago. Nostalgia.
  Consulted W’pedia re the form, and slightly confused came back to your piece, found that your colour coding had done the job for me.
  

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    Doggerel DaveJuly 6th, 2021 23:09

    I have nothing to say today,
    The world is a disgusting mess;
    And so if I could have my way
    I have nothing to say today.
    Let others be cheerful and pray
    It will work out alright – don’t stress.
    I have nothing to say today,
    The world is a disgusting mess.
    
    Howzat?
    
    

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    DoveAugust 7th, 2021 08:14

    Oh my my heart skipped a beat in elation! That is a superb Triolet, and quite current too! Glad you tried the formatting

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  Goldfinch60 July 7th, 2021 01:09

  Beautiful Triolet Dove. Looking forward to more of them.
  
  Andy

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    DoveAugust 7th, 2021 08:15

    Thanks so much Andy!, smiles

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  🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 July 22nd, 2021 11:39

  Aw yayy same with me, i love flowers so much and find them so enchanting and spellbinding , so i enjoyed your little beautiful poem on your admiration for them. Kudos!
  
  Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

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    DoveAugust 7th, 2021 08:17

    Thanks so much! And I’ll stop on by!