The Fairies Cast A Spell- Triolet

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  dusk arising July 6th, 2021 12:55

  Initially this appears quite simple in it's beauty but it's very cleverly composed too.

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    DoveJuly 6th, 2021 13:09

    Yes, it’s simplistic but a Triolet has a set pattern!
    Thanks for stopping by Dusk

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    dusk arisingJuly 6th, 2021 13:12

    I didn't know that Dove. I have no education in poetry and often find myself caught out LOL. Anyway, I think the whole is a beautiful poem and now i have re-read it I'm going to put it in my favourites.

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  Neville July 6th, 2021 13:04

  
  
  I have tried a lot of different poetic forms in my time but am amazed at just how many you have posted here .. never tried a triolet before tho'
  A fun post and like DA has indicated, not as easy as one might imagine ..
  I love it when you put in an appearance me duck 🙂
  

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    DoveJuly 6th, 2021 13:13

    Thanks Neville, it’s my first Triolet! I am pleased with the beauty! I’m trying different
    formats! Eventually I’ll get back to my own poetry style! Which consist of pentameter
    and abab rhyming ! Thanks for your support
    
    

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  Fay Slimm. July 6th, 2021 14:54

  Lovely and very dainty triolet dear Dove - -- love the colours too.

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    DoveAugust 7th, 2021 08:09

    Thank you kindly dear Fay! Much appreciated

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  Doggerel Dave July 6th, 2021 19:01

  Thanks Dove. That had something of the flavor of folk clubs I frequented long ago. Nostalgia.
  Consulted W’pedia re the form, and slightly confused came back to your piece, found that your colour coding had done the job for me.
  

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    Doggerel DaveJuly 6th, 2021 23:09

    I have nothing to say today,
    The world is a disgusting mess;
    And so if I could have my way
    I have nothing to say today.
    Let others be cheerful and pray
    It will work out alright – don’t stress.
    I have nothing to say today,
    The world is a disgusting mess.
    
    Howzat?
    
    

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    DoveAugust 7th, 2021 08:14

    Oh my my heart skipped a beat in elation! That is a superb Triolet, and quite current too! Glad you tried the formatting

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    Doggerel DaveAugust 7th, 2021 19:58

    Thanks Dove. Also out there , slightly adjusted, i think, as a full pin: 'A Triolet Ahead of The Pack' appropriately dedicated to you of course.
    While here I have a very small apology to make - in my piece on 'Love' I used the name Dove and cooing to deflame the whole notion of love in poetry. Did not realise you, or rather your nom de plume were here, but just out of sight. So - apologies - no offense meant.
    Take care..

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  Goldfinch60 July 7th, 2021 01:09

  Beautiful Triolet Dove. Looking forward to more of them.
  
  Andy

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    DoveAugust 7th, 2021 08:15

    Thanks so much Andy!, smiles

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  🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 July 22nd, 2021 11:39

  Aw yayy same with me, i love flowers so much and find them so enchanting and spellbinding , so i enjoyed your little beautiful poem on your admiration for them. Kudos!
  
  Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

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    DoveAugust 7th, 2021 08:17

    Thanks so much! And I’ll stop on by!