Longboards & You

Poetic Dan



She sung me a song

To show where I belong 

Up on the hill

On our longboards 

 

I've wrote a poem or two

To tell the world it's true

Who could I be ?

With what they see 

 

Putting light in the dark

The day they entered my heart

Grounded by a hand

Drifting off by a voice 

 

 

I guess I'm try to say

Thanks for rolling my way

Dancing everyday 

On our favourite stage 

 

KING and QUEENS of the Hill

Gliding into fields

No worries comes real

On our longboards....

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 8th, 2021 01:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: Finding time for my rhymes as they always will be on my mind and helped me grow to this forever changing being. Also have the honor of a special case staying with me for a month of rehabilitation, halfway through and can slowly feel our transformation. For within each tear I let go of my fear. Keep up the write! Always appreciate your time....
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  • Goldfinch60

    May that light get brighter every day Dan.

    Andy

    • Poetic Dan

      Hopefully so bright I turn into Mr Fahrenheit or at least stay as the great pretender lol

      Always appreciate your time my friend

    • L. B. Mek

      'Putting light in the dark
      The day they entered my heart
      Grounded by a hand'..
      you have such a way of getting
      to that core nucleus of worded veracity
      in all the wisdom you imbue
      within every write, I read from you...
      thank you!
      dear Poet: sincerely

      • Poetic Dan

        And truly feel blessed to read your words and feel your magnificent vibes my friend.
        Always the wind on my back, gently keeping me on track!

      • Doggerel Dave

        I really like the happiness in your poem/song, Dan.
        Ashamed to say though, I'm not quite sure exactly what longboards are..?
        Your video> Great head scarf - reminds me of the TV show Survivor - any connection? 😊

        • Poetic Dan

          Well that happiness is all the children of this world deserve my friend and always a honour to be given your time.

          They are just a big skateboard my friend, for those that want to cruise and to old for tricks. (not that I could)

          If I post something tomorrow I'll be sure to throw up a video of me and her on the seafront.

          Ps. I now use an electronic one as my knee can't take more that 10 minutes now lol

          • Doggerel Dave

            A motorised skateboard, Dan? They'll be adding windscreen wipers next! 😊

            • Poetic Dan

              I'll just put the bike helmet on... lol



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