Beginnings.
Crowded room crossed,
surrounded by name exchange
their eyes met.
Pregnant attraction accosted
suppressed breath
and as fingers first touched
time melted
in stirring fusion of minds.
Inner knowing wired, two felt
love's beginnings again.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A little poetic addition to the quote above - - do hope you enjoy.
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So very, very true Fay. Wonderful words, straight into favourites.
Andy
Am thrilled you enjoyed the read Andy and a double thank you for adding it to your list of favourites.
Not sure at that point It's love... but I have felt that moment... Nice one, Fay.
Of course you are right Dave - - at that point it could be just lust - - but we who have once felt that moment will never forget its intensity.
and 'ding', its began again
a smile, a second look - back
and a name
that simply singes, the strings
of your pulsating: hopeful heart..
what a wonderful depiction dear Fay
so acute in detail, so wondrous in poetic wording
a joy to read, thank you!
Thrilled that my little piece gave you the impetus to write such a great comment L.B. - - great that you enjoyed the 'ding!' of a feeling when a smile or a touch could mean another of those sudden "beginnings"
we all need something to look forward to at the end of the day ..
and wot better than a new beginning eh' Fay ..
mission accomplished my lady ... x
Yes we all look forward to romantic beginnings Nev. even when we have to dig deep into memory to renew those feelings -- - and truly when you are moved to write "mission accomplished" I know my few lines have taken you back too...........x
Great write, Fay.
The moment when chance and destiny collide. Beautiful.
A great phrase to use Jerry in your comment - " when chance and destiny collide. " - - -- - that is just what my pen was trying to describe in Beginnings. Thanks a load for dropping by.
and in that moment they inhaled each other’s essence, so masterfully exposed by your words.
Ah - to inhale each other's essence - what a poetic addition to that special moment when first introductions over the pair felt unable to step away - --- a very perceptive comment dear friend.
You catch the moment with perfect words.
Sincere thanks for your comment on Beginnings and so pleased you enojoyed the read.
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