Passed The Universe.

Goldfinch60



As I step off the Universe into this new place

The wonder of love and happiness abound,

A new place where there is no sorrow,

No unhappiness,

Where all the life I see is good.

Agreement is the way of life,

Where all help each other into a better way,

A better way of living in this place.

I look back at the Universe and wonder,

Wonder why my Universe, my world

Cannot be like this and all would be fine.

But I have moved on and am now here,

Here in this new place where sorrow,

Sorrow and acrimony have never been.

Now happy in my life where love is for all,

Maybe I have found that place,

That place the Hippies now live,

And are led by their mantra,

Make Love Not War.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 9th, 2021 01:25
  • Comment from author about the poem: Myselfandme asked me to let him know what the new place was like in my poem yesterday, I therefore had to write this.
  • Category: Surrealist
  • Views: 58
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • Fay Slimm.

    You describe my idea of paradise here my dear Andy - - making love not war is what I endorse too -- a most moving read .

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Fay, I have always thought the Hippies had it right.

      Andy

    • Doggerel Dave

      And so we did (me - hippie disguised as a straight), Andy.
      Your entry today is pure unadulterated fantasy - but none the worse for that.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Dave, we can only wish.....

        Andy

      • L. B. Mek

        as ever, you paint a picture
        worth believing-in
        you serenade us with hope
        worth investing-in
        quite simply: your Poetry
        soothes our aches
        and gifts us, our phoenix
        of revitalised breath...
        thank you!
        for all your unwavering positivity, Andy
        have a great weekend my friend

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you for your very kind words Mek, so much appreciated.

          Andy

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Good read, Andy.
          Well suited for this dark and rainy New York day.
          (sideways rain I may add)

          • Goldfinch60

            Glad it suited you Jerry, sideways rain is quite something as it must be a bit breezy as well. LOL

            Andy

          • myself and me

            Thank you so much for answering my curiosity. Need to mark this place on my GPS.

            • Goldfinch60

              I will see you there in a while then mandm.

              Andy

              • myself and me

                Hope I won't get lost on the way.

              • beano

                Life is local, and sometimes it takes time to realise what's best for the whole world, is also best for ourselves. And it's resulted in this fine meditative and uplifting piece!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Beano for your kind words, much appreciated.

                  Andy

                • SureshG

                  I am your co-pilot, my friend

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Welcome to the new world suresh.

                    Andy

                  • Saxon Crow

                    Utopia for all. Here we come

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Yes, here we come SC.

                      Andy

                    • Accidental Poet

                      Right on man. ; )

                    • Jon Nakapalau

                      Last three lines - powerful.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        I have a great deal of respect for the Hippies.

                        Andy



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