Submitting
An ink-toned ebony night captures
sound and hones from stillness quiet rapture.
And surging toward me while I lie
powerless a God-shine reimburses my mind.
Consciously losing time's track day's
negatives melt as senses fall up into space.
I face nova's glow and while black's
velvet stays holed I shall digest this galaxy.
One with the cosmos my stress ceases
for in submitting to space me-ness recedes.
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Fay Slimm. (
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'Consciously losing time's track
the day's negatives melt
as senses fall up into space.'
as usual, decadently worded dear Fay!
love the imagery of falling-up
as we surrender
to that soothing cadence of acceptance
knowing, its futile
to try and fight our learning curve: of plight...
Glad you saw through all that falling dear friend. surrender we must to the limitless space eh ? Much gratitude L.B. for your words of encouragement to my version of Submitting.
Beautiful, Fay.
I have felt that. Love lying out on a clear night and reminding myself, "I,m just a part of all of that"
Glad you too have felt the zing of feeling nearer to just everything up there dear Jerry.
Such a peaceful, harmonious night to merge yourself into the universe.
Oh yes the night has to be clear with starlight galore - thanks so much for the read and comment.
I am right beside you Fay .. another splendid post today ma'am ..
He loves the term me-ness too n truly 🙂 ... x
Glad to know you too view closeness essential to being taken to rapture by looking upward..... just meant to say thank you and nicely and look what I was led to.......... x
Aye! I submit to you.
Ah - thanking you muchly and I am so flattered you liked the read of Beginnings my friend.
Being at one with the cosmos is such a wonderful place to be Fay.
Andy
Wholly agree dear Andy -- the cosmos has secrets that busy minds can never receive. Stillness is vital to being at one with nature.
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