At The Top Of The Hill.

Goldfinch60



I walk up my hill of life,

A life that is filled,

Filled with wonderful things.

My children now all grown up

With children of their own,

The joy of grandchildren so wonderful,

All such beautiful members of my life.

 

I look down

And there just behind me I see her,

I see the love of my life,

Now departed from me in body

But with me in Spirit.

 

As I look up the hill,

This hill of life I am climbing

I see the top

And there I see her,

See her waiting,

Waiting for me at the top of my hill.

And once together again

We will be together forever,

Never ever parted again.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 10th, 2021 01:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: I know she is waiting for me.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 50
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments9

  • Neville


    take note any disbelievers out there .. this is what true love is all about ..

    • Goldfinch60

      Most kind Neville, thank you.

      Andy

      • Doggerel Dave

        Absolutely - no one should or can knock it.
        Good for you, Andy.

      • Saxon Crow

        Long way to the top yet though gf! Take your time and enjoy the view. Lovely poem

        • Goldfinch60

          Yes SC, there is a long time to go yet but she will be there for me. Thank you.

          Andy

        • Accidental Poet

          Yes Andy, she is with you every step of the way. ; )

          • Goldfinch60

            All the time she is with me AP, thank you.

            Andy

          • SureshG

            She is still your forever love, and stamina to keep climbing that hill and writing these prose

            • Goldfinch60

              All the time Suresh, she is always there for me.

              Andy

            • dusk arising

              Moved me to tears.

              A must for my favourites.

              • Goldfinch60

                Most kind d a, thank you so much.

                Andy

              • Jerry Reynolds

                Loving write, Andy.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Jerry, much appreciated.

                  Andy

                • Jon Nakapalau

                  Wonderful meditation on what is truly important - inspired.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Jon, much appreciated.

                    Andy

                  • myself and me

                    You are living such a wonderful and true life. A life I am dreaming about.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you mandm, most kind. That life will be there for you.

                      Andy

                    • Thekkinkkattil

                      A touching poem.I too feel the same . Hope that loved ones will be waiting for us is a real good thought may it be our parents or friends

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank for your kind words our loved ones will be there for us all.

                        Andy



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