One goes

dorothv

one goes

and then another

three petals 

and the fourth drops

no more flowers then

-

but it's no one's fault

  • Author: dorothv (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 10th, 2021 13:47
  • Comment from author about the poem: 🌼 love me or love me not
  • Category: Love
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  • flyingfish

    A good read. Thanks. End on an odd number, perchance, silly me. Most flowers have an odd number of petals - that helps

  • Jerry Reynolds

    Good read, Dorothy.

  • Goldfinch60

    One of those dropped petals may be filled with love though.

    Andy



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