Briefly
Cherry blossom wind falls slow
on snow flake kissed garden
Mind how they do both come and go
yet leave no trace behind them
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Author:
Neville (
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but they leave memories.
Andy
Yep .. sure do cheers GF60 ..
Much of the world's phenomena I could feel much better about if that were the case - if yer knows wot I mean......
Good 'un, Neville.
I think I know wot you mean .. cheers 🙂
A lovely short read of your version of briefness Nev. Nature often leaves no trace behind of her precocious diversions here on our side of the coast. Winter cold kissing blossom may be brief but how sad to see cherry-drop fall to maverick frost............
that'll do nicely ma'am ,, more than appreciated and then some .. 🙂
Some of the most beautiful events happen in the shortest of time. Well penned my friend. ; )
bless you n truly AP .. 🙂
To enjoy life but not keep it! If I could see the blessing of my time and not the burden, one can only keep trying!
Until melted or blown away, a pleasure to read your work today.
Be sure to keep them coming 😉
Cheers Dan .. hang in there mate 🙂
Beautiful write, Neville.
Nature is ever inspiring.
Absolutely write .. Thank you Jerry 🙂
'of those illusive gifts, in our lives
you subtly pen, my wise friend;
where, we seldom take the 'brief' moment
required, to realise: just how much of life
we miss-out - on, while waiting
for that unattainable, Hollywood
of miraged - something, anything
deemed important, by other's
simply, because they refuse to admit
the resplendent majesty of existence
we experience, in our everyday lives...!'
another brilliant shorty, dear poet
showcasing the epitome of worded, Brevity!
Okay, since the trend has been set, let's be brief .. Thanking you kindly L.B 🙂
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