Freefallen
Both gentle and brief
like some free falling leaf
He did love her, yet quietly …
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: July 12th, 2021 01:49
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That love sounds so fulfilling.
Andy
Cheers my friend ..
No attachments! Be kind to yourself my friend
You got it Dan .. cheers mate 🙂
Heart-touching this little three liner --
-- and so very telling. Brilliant scribing again my friend............x
a huge thank you is called for .. so I'm sending one shortly ... thanks Fay ... x
these words, I find - acutely depict
our fear-warped interpretation of innocent romance
when our blinkered perceptions, could only see
this one and only - dramatic, opportunity in life
to attain, that love we recognise
but can't quite - distinguish, its likeness
to our youthful naïvetés: overt fascination
in our shameless - lust-addled, puberty mind's
lost, in those blissful years of 'curvature idolisation...'
lol
You can indubitably and indefinitely come again sir ... 🙂
Beautiful, Neville.
Totally relatable. I can fall in love in a crosswalk or across an ocean and yes I do it "quietly."
Sshh .. everyone's gonna want to know ya secret now .. but its safe with me 🙂 Cheers JR ..
The best way...
Absobloominlutely my friend ... and thanks for taking a peek today 🙂
Neville,
‘yet quietly…’
I breathed a sigh of relief
when he fell off the face of the earth.
I enjoyed this short write.
Laura🌻
........... I dunno whether to laugh or cry for ya my dear friend .. but enjoying my little scribble here makes up for everything .. Thanks a bunch Laura 🌻🌻🌻 n truly ..... 🙂
It's the quiet ones who love the deepest. Wonderful write N. ; )
... As very nearly almost always, you are absolutely write AP .. Many mahoosive thanks indeed 🙂
Holly wind! You blow me away.
What a brilliant piece to hold and enjoy.
Wow, you made me feel like it's Christmas already ... Bless ya M & M 🙂
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