I've risked it for a biscuit plenty of times, I'm sure I've written one or two at the start of my rhymes.
You'll find it at no 33 or is that 44, I don't even venture back unless I'm grounded before!
I'm not new to this and I thought I could get away with a standing up nappy change.
The gift was perfect and stayed in an odd sort of ball, a few wipes as she played no need for drama at all
We was so close and on the final hurdle but as I lifted a leg to put the pull-up on, bam the pee of surprise and to her quick delight of a puddle to dance.
I could do nothing but laugh! As she happily did an in door festival trance, all while trying to get wep wipes to do as much absorbing in task.
After the completion I went and dunken not one but two richtea in my brew at once, shoveling them in for a job well done.
At least we had fun!
- Author: Poetic Dan ( Offline)
- Published: July 12th, 2021 10:41
- Comment from author about the poem: Been a while but thought I'd share a random and even throw together a quick video to look back on, as we truly have nothing more than our memories to hold. Even then they can fade, so I'll try to keep loving everyday (best we can anyway)
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Comments5
Children are so wonderful Dan and bring so much joy into our life.
Andy
Ups and downs but what else is it for my friend!
Children are so wonderful Dan and bring so much joy into our life.
Andy
Absolutely. She is such an angel.
Definitely gives me wings on the good days and grounding on the not so good.
Always appreciated my friend
Beautiful and wholesome: that simple joy
in our experience of all-things, meaningful existence
worded so vividly - and intoxicatingly, Poetic!
'I don't even venture back, unless
I'm grounded before!'..
this line, my friend
is at the core nucleus, of the wisdom
I strive: to realise...
thank you for choosing to share, dear poet
what a joy to read
Well be careful with the hit good sir, I've been told to much of a good thing is bad for you but yet I'm still here!
Not sure I've been given the word intoxicating before but I'll never stop, as legends like you are cream of the crop...
Always a pleasure and truly appreciated!
I just wrote something called, You know it! Thank you for instinctively inspiring me to write it, have a fabulous journey dear poetic brother....
shoulder to shoulder, dogpaddling
our sea, of poetic ink
for as long as fate, sees fit: to gift
When it comes to children, ain’t it strange what memories our mind records as memorable
Absolutely my friend only the most lighthearted should stay, then hopefully at the end its a bit easier to float away!
Always appreciate your time
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