time

dusk arising

time
seems to have passed
like the torrent
of a mountainside
cascading stream
yet
rests now still
still as a millpond's
patience

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 13th, 2021 00:05
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  • Goldfinch60

    Time is like that, it does not seem to have any constants in life.

    Andy

  • Saxon Crow

    Yiu mean all manky and full of pond weed? Fair point

  • Neville



    ... in the thankless race against it .. and with no chance of winning ..
    ... you sir, have just surpassed both my self and your pen ...

  • Fay Slimm.

    You scribe time to perfection in this lament about its passing so quickly - - - nothing to stop time my dear friend.

  • L. B. Mek

    thought provoking, truly
    just wish I had the brain cells
    to understand the millpond reference..
    another of your insightful write's Dusk, thank you

  • Jerry Reynolds

    Great write, Dusk.
    "A millpond's patience" very sharp.

  • myself and me

    The perfect "time" ever exist.



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