time
seems to have passed
like the torrent
of a mountainside
cascading stream
yet
rests now still
still as a millpond's
patience
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Author:
dusk arising (
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Time is like that, it does not seem to have any constants in life.
Andy
Yiu mean all manky and full of pond weed? Fair point
... in the thankless race against it .. and with no chance of winning ..
... you sir, have just surpassed both my self and your pen ...
You scribe time to perfection in this lament about its passing so quickly - - - nothing to stop time my dear friend.
thought provoking, truly
just wish I had the brain cells
to understand the millpond reference..
another of your insightful write's Dusk, thank you
Great write, Dusk.
"A millpond's patience" very sharp.
The perfect "time" ever exist.
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