Give me a problem and I won't try to solve it.
I'll sit on the floor letting nature dissolve it
If unmovable then time won't recognise it
Beyond refusal then I'll just go round it
No matter the condition we're in motion with it
Air in my lungs lighten the brain to fly from it
Blood in my veins deepening the heart to love it
Each soul is a poet that's just waiting to know it
- Author: Poetic Dan ( Offline)
- Published: July 13th, 2021 14:15
- Comment from author about the poem: Did this after being given the gift of the word "intoxicating" and I'll admit I let it go straight to my head, for everything is a ripple affect. Always appreciated with much peace and respect, I thought I'd put up what I now call a golden oldie...
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 27
Comments6
you are a poet Dan.
I know it!
Ha! Just a man that grew up with "to much" hip hop and loves a rhyme that feels you up!
Something we should all do to let it flow.
Appreciate your time
Great poem , Dan 🙂
Even better now it reflected off your ear my dear, my spirit are high and hope they stay. But I'm sure I'll soon get some rain 😉
Always appreciate your time my friend
🙂 I’m glad your spirits high . It’s not been a good day for me today ... too much sadness today .
Each problem can be disregarded if it does not affect your life.
Andy
My friend at this actual point in time there is none, I just enjoyed writing the rhyme.
Although communication on the intellectual level is still my real challenge lol
I liked the thought of ‘intoxicating’ going to your head and you got drunk and disorderly as a result? Tut Tut!
Trust a poet who won’t try to solve a problem but writes a poem instead? I’ll have to think about that one…. 😊
Exactly without a drop, in made my head spin and out this popped!
Always appreciated my friend
Now I know. A poetic way to live life.
I'm sure you did that perfectly on your own my friend!
I know that you know that I know that you know it. What was the problem again, doesn’t matter, when you put it so poetically.
Brilliantly done if I did have one, it's been written gone!
Always appreciated my friend
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.