Upon a Small White Feather

Neville

Upon a Small White Feather

 

Somewhere, riding high

on the curl

of a single white feather

He is looking

down on you and me

and guess what,

I feel sure that he is smiling

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 14th, 2021 03:04
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • dusk arising

    Ah those little white feathers, the tell tale evidence of a missed loved one looking down on us.
    Nicely worded joyful reminder of a missed person.

    • Neville



      Got it in one number one ... cheers n all that stuff DA 🙂

    • Fay Slimm.

      A comforting read and no doubt about it my luverly friend........x

      • Neville



        Thank you Fay ........................................ x

      • Doggerel Dave

        Do you wish to rehabilitate the white feather, Neville?
        Can't avoid the image of ladies presenting white feathers to 'cowards' during WW1.
        Angels perhaps? I'll settle for that.....

        • Neville



          I thought someone and maybe you sir might raise that particular issue .. angels do it for me .. on this page anyway, cheers DD

        • Accidental Poet

          Yes N, smiles for everyone. ; )

          • Neville



            Cheers AP & very muchly 🙂

          • myself and me

            You must be in a very delightful mood recently. Everything is floating. The leaf, now the feather. I am standing on the ground watching all these happening. Just brilliant.

            • Neville


              in lieu of any formal thanks myself & me, I guess you could say I'm on a roll .......................... a lieu roll perhaps ... cheers M&M 🙂

            • Goldfinch60

              He certainly is Neville.

              Andy

              • Neville



                I have kinda got that snap feeling coming over me my friend .. Cheers Andy 🙂

              • Caring dove

                White feathers are a sign of angels . Nice poem 🙂

                • Neville



                  thank you yellowrose .. a very much appreciated visitation my friend 🙂



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