Hippie Warning.

Goldfinch60



They did have it so right in their lives,

No thoughts of war,

No thoughts of hate.

Just a world where love and peace

Would be there for the world,

Where all understood everybody.

Why can it not be so?

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 15th, 2021 01:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: Was Jesus the first Hippie? Imagine all the people living as one.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 54
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments11

  • Poetic Dan

    Yes I think so and in that idea of balance, I do believe we was ment to be The light on this rock as nature provides plenty of dark this, that would happily eat us up!

    Great work my friend

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Dan, maybe one day...........

      Andy

    • Saxon Crow

      Jesus was the first and only hippy maaaan. Good poem GF

      • Goldfinch60

        No he was the first but others had the same idea of peace and love.

        Andy

      • Neville


        I was one and still am at heart .. write on brother ... 🙂

        • Goldfinch60

          That’s great Neville, I think at heart I am on as well

          Andy

        • dusk arising

          Oh that it were oh so simple. It's simple for some, impossible for others.

          • Goldfinch60

            If only ………..

            Andy

          • Doggerel Dave

            Indeed why? In the next three days (three writes) I hope to read the answers, Andy.

            • Goldfinch60

              I wish I knew Dave, we need to start by getting rid of the politicians!!!

              Andy

              • Doggerel Dave

                Day one, an answer, Andy - you have days two and three to formulate an alternative....................................

              • 2 more comments

              • Accidental Poet

                Love and peace, the world's cure for every problem on Earth. Great write Andy. ; )

              • John Prophet

                “Why can it not be so?”
                Because people rule the world.

                Nice write.

              • L. B. Mek

                yeah, Andy (if only they'd have kept singing to that song sheet)
                but then they all grew-up
                realised they needed to infiltrate 'the system'
                to bring about sustained change
                and so, now we have weaponised university Grad's
                with 'warped' liberal mindset's
                with no room for a common ground, because
                their professor's baptised them
                in that activism zealotry of blinkered ideology
                where inclusivity means
                doing everything 'their way, in only one way'
                and free loving's freedom
                is hijacked by those who endlessly seek: that mirage
                of a socialist utopia...
                (I'm sorry my opinionated rambling
                took me somewhere political, and far
                from the spirit of your write, dear poet
                I just think the assassination
                of both Lennon and Robert Kennedy
                really poisoned that generation's opportunity
                for genuine change, and so
                decades later, we've seen their once - humane ideal's
                dissolve into such a divisive weapon
                against the goodness that still exists in society,
                when you think a whole generation of graduates
                has been brain washed into believing
                that free speech is toxic and needs to be regulated???
                that's how far those same 'hippies' have devolved
                such a shame, truly...)

                • Goldfinch60

                  Unfortunately very true words Mek, maybe one day people will realise the problems in our world and find a way into love for all.

                  Andy

                  • L. B. Mek

                    Amen!

                  • SureshG

                    Hippie UTOPIA!,,,,,,

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Hurrah Suresh, hurrah.

                      Andy

                    • Jerry Reynolds

                      Good write, Andy.
                      The cost to feed, clothe, house, and educate every child on the planet annually is equal to what the nations of the world spend on armaments quarterly. If we don't do something collectively to stop it we will create an Extent Level Event in this century.
                      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RgqtrlixYR4

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Very true Jerry, it is possible to do what you have said but unfortunately they won’t do it until somebody shows them the right way.

                        Andy

                      • Thekkinkkattil

                        A pleasant thought where there is only love and no war a nice read

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you Thekkinkkattil, we can but hope.

                          Andy



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