With the sun rays in my face and the mutts at my pace.
The sound of your voice is like a warm embrace
A friendly guidance along my little path
Held together by a homemade scarf
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I've been to see two specialist for my pain as my right arm feels like I'm holding fire and can't let go, yesterday was another let down but thanks to a friend. I found these words in a video to her and know that this emotional trauma that has trapped my nerve, will find its place back within me to cry no more tears and float in blissful poetic harmony. One day I'll fully surrender to all this, thanks to all those that come here to embrace who you are. By day my sun and by night my star....
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Hope you find some respite from your pains Dan.
Cheers buddy right now it feels like the only relief is the laughter and tears in poetry! Truly.
Although I've now looked at 121 trauma yoga, it's time I up my game as I know there's no magic pill...
Plus I may not use the anger or rage but it's definitely still there! Luckily I found good souls that care, have a good weekend my man!
Trauma cab be held in the body . Sorry for your pain . Yoga is good , I practise it sometimes .
Nice poem ))
I have no choice but to listen to my body, just said to it we will definitely start from Monday!
Always appreciate your time
with this poetic tool of self-expression
you've been gifted
you need only to pinpoint, the root cause
of your affliction
if its merely emotion based, at fruition
then let your pen
ink a path: to finding your solution, my friend...
(careful though, sometimes Time is needed
for experts to find what they are looking for
so might be a good idea to heed your body and rest
when/if you can, so you can give yourself
a chance to heal)
The nearly 800 I've written in 6 or 7 years I think has been just that, there is no more need to write but ask my body to not react! Now I think I'll do one just like that when I get that moment to relax!
Inspirational as ever, have a great weekend! I hope you caught my last one as you know it started from you and a simple word!
"intoxicating"
Keep it doing your thing!
May you find solace and relief with your poetic mind and pen them off to reach the world
Thank you kindly and can only hope so, with a rhyming reply you truly keep my spirits up to heal this hole!
Really appreciate your time with all of my soul
Much peace and respect
I’ve been to many a specialist
Have yet not discovered the catalyst
That can relieve me of my pain
An unabated messages to my brain
Hope the remedy is found soon
With a rhyme like that how could it not!
Really really appreciate it and read it 3 times, in honor of harmony we all wish to feel.
Thank you
I hope things sort out for you soon Buddy. I can imagine how much of a complete bummer it is. At least you have a handmade scarf!
Absolutely my friend, its about trying to find the art. Even if it's only in a scarf
these words are some of your best yet Dan ..
hope something comes along soon to ease that pain mate ..
Each one we use the next day should be my friend, yet no to worry if we fail there's always another day!
Definitely ain't getting better but at I'm slowly making time, for my mind again
Such a beautiful, lovely and heartwarming scarf.
That it was, for a sunny day lol
Always appreciate your time
May your words relieve the pain in your arm, over the years I have known you you have relieved other hard times through poetry so you know that you can relieve this as well.
Sending healing thoughts to you Dan.
Andy
I can only keep trying my friend until the end, pain or no pain we should find time to rhyme anyway.
Always appreciated my friend
Have fantastic day
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