It could be there but it will never come, the day of acknowledgement for what went on.
I've sat, I've walked, had a good cry and plenty of talks
Yet never with the two soul that were ment to be in control.
To the scared little boy on top of the stairs, hoping none of this energy comes near.
To the teenager then wrapped up in rage, unable to confront or turn a page
Now as an adult undertaking methods to engage
For everything that happened may of made me this way
Still undoing what nature never planned in the first place
The need for acknowledgement and an over-controlling man
Having to learn to breathe through all my emotions again, or my whole body will eventually go bang.
This is something I can't rush or even try to crush. It's between every moment that can never be touched.
To know the sacred feeling of enough is enough, when using the greatest muscle to keep the blood flushed
The spirit in my heart may never forgive but its needs to love, so I write from the soul to never give this up.
Good bye to reality of it happening to us!
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Wrote this yesterday on my healing journey, maybe a bit heavy for a Sunday so I threw together a little video! Thanks again to all on here that make this place what it is! Beams of poetic light, always appreciated and keep up the write.
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Great video, lovely to see that beautiful girl growing up.
In your post you are telling of the need to recall the past. The longer you keep doing this, then the longer it will haunt you. Try to let it be where it belongs, in the dim distant past..... so far removed from all the love and wholesomeness which surrounds you now. Ask yourself what are you, today's man or yesterday's problems.
What comes up must come out and after a beating that was received in a so called "professional" hands, it had to be said. Yet the difference in writing it this time, I didn't get upset. I did feel finally separate from it and even today I wrote of the beauty in my world.
So in ac way you was right, what you read there was still a part of yesterday's man. But it's only ever a moment because today I'm super Dan ( just a bit saw)
Always appreciate your time and honoured to be given all your words over the years.
Bring me proud to be me as you should to be you!
Just to confirm to myself I'm trying to truly let go, the beautiful lady underneath saw it on the words in the video!
Cheers buddy, hope you got that call
Dan,
Of course you will never forget what you experienced in the past. I’m so glad to know that you’ll never give up.
“memories to hold on to as much as their love, let life be the gift that help us to Dance.”
~Poetic Dan
Now is the time to forge ahead with your present blessings…
“Let your crew set you free”…
Look at your latest blessing…she’s a sight to behold. You’re looking at the future…guide your crew to be what you never had as a youngster. A perfect opportunity to make it right. Your three children are your blessings. Guide them to the best of your ability to make this world a better place to be part of. You are a strong and determined young man who can do it…YES YOU CAN…YES YOU CAN!!
Thank you for sharing the video. I enjoyed it very much.
I’m so glad to read your poetry…now that I’m able to again.
Laura🌻
And there you are like a gift from above to find my words from today's video and still sit with me for yesterday!
This is a healing journey in on, it will never be puff one day I'm done...ooo I think I'll write one to that!
I've missed your inspiration, see how quickly it happens lol
I'm glad you are now able and life has been a kind as it can.
Always appreciated my friend
…as I appreciate you dear poet!🌻
time flies like the wind dont it just ..
fruit flies like bananas, dont they just 🙂
smashing vid n kid Dan .. you got the lot mate .. loads to look forward to .. write on brother ...
Neville
Ha ha, loads to let go and just as much to look forward. I guess that's what keeps us in motion
Thank you buddy!
Though never far behind, the past is just the past. What you've learned from that past is your fuel for a better future. You're a man, and a proud man at that. Look around you, see all the strength the builds you strong. And a great write too. ; )
Sometimes to proud my friend but I'm slowly learning.
Always appreciated
Expressive writing Dan ) good to write this out . It’s upsetting to have a sad past that hurts us .. and it causes grief . The inner child needs healing . Do you ever give yourself a hug ?
I thought of your words last night and as pain kicked in, I breathed in with that hug in mind.
Truly thank you for your time my friend
Dan awesome expression here. I'm not going to share my opinion with you because it's already there in your poem.
Ha! Now that is a message I love, my inner child said thank you for helping clear up the blood.
With words that come from the heart, told ya, Saxon Crow should never stop!
Appreciate the love
Yes Dan - Here from the first post on It's all said already - in your own words, 'enough is enough", so from now on it will surely be: forward ever forward.
PS: that skateboard video> I'm trying to write a piece on the seaside right now after that but it is very slow - can you beat me to the draw?
Quicker than the wild west, the beat of my heart puts my breath to the test. Yet to be rolling with my crew will always be the best!
Really enjoyed that and think I'll keep it!
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That past is now behind you, you have come such a long way in to a better life Dan, keep moving forward into that better life.
Andy
'Beams of poetic light,'
ain't that just MPS, in four words!
a wonderfully raw and brave write
thanks for sharing your journey with us, dear poet
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