Time Versus Love.
Time the rabid old monster
wants no permission
to gobble up passion,
knocks back agile wanting
and swallows up bliss
with indifferent non-action.
- - - - - - YET - - - - - -
Love the ageless young mistress
smiles at rushed hunger,
comforts each searcher
who needs some assistance
to find ease in another
with frequent undisguised thirst.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Frequent undisguised thirst eh?? I'll have a pint of that please.
Time has certainly had a gobble at my passion.... i better find me that ageless young mistress you describe.
Ha -ha -- hope you succeed in your quest Dusk - - and will send you a bottle of undisguised thirst in the first post tomorrow..
Poet sips from the spring of "Undisguised Thirst" and delivers a distinguished verse.
And so kind of you to say so Jerry. Glad you found the read entertaining my friend.
you can beat an egg .. but you just can't beat an ageless young mistress Fay .............. x
timeless my lady .............. n true ... 🙂 x
Ah - forsooth thy lady thanketh thee most profusely mine Sire - -- agelessy young maketh mistresses masters in arts of love as thou wilt agree.................x
Beautifully and masterfully written Fay. ; )
So thrilled you enjoyed the read A.P,
My Dear Fay,
Aah, yes indeed…
“for those who love,
time is
Eternity!”
A wonderful write , my dear poetess.
Thank you for sharing .
Laura🌻
Always my pleasure to share and receive your welcome reviews on my small efforts dear Laura.
Sorry Fay, but love (if indeed that's what we are talking about) old and comfortable is better.
Love-erly write, though.
Love is either a desert or a garden, never anything in between. The "ageless young mistress" of which you speak is imaginary, a dream in the mind of a lover, but the "frequent undisguised thirst" surely exists in reality. Love can be eternal if two hearts are in sync. What a beautiful poem for my Sunday respite. Loved it.- Phil A
Such true words Fay, love can overcome all.
Andy
I liked your poem. most loved lines
Love the ageless young mistress
smiles at rushed hunger,
comforts each searcher
who needs some assistance
to find ease in another
with frequent undisguised thirst.
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