What Matters Most
It does not really matter
how
You choose to ignore him
now
Neither when, or how or
where
What really matters most
is surely
That you know
he’s somewhere near
And the very
simple fact, despite yourself
it seems,
You really do, still care …… x
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though I did enjoy the poem
Bless ya and big time my friend 🙂
Filled with care this write sounds to my mind like good parental advice to a youngster who chooses to end a relationship but then despite all odds is apt to change mind mid-way between today and tomorrow - - - -- scribed with your usual skilled attention to word and line-length it becomes so beguiling that I always want to know a little bit extra.............x
spot on maybe Fay .. well as near as near can be ............. and bless you for noticing earlier what I initially failed to ..... can't thank you enough for that .. nuff sed 🙂 xx
Relationship sans communication -
Crappy causation
Ain’t no privation –
Onward to salvation…
............. thanks Dave 🙂
................You are welcome, Neville....
That caring will always be there Neville.
Andy
I shall drink to that my golden friend ... cheers 🙂
Coooeee, good write N.
This about me and , and a gal? She knows I'm somewhere near, an she cares about me.
I been meeting those gals while I was cut orf here. Sshh, don't tell! lol.
Hello Steven .. I gather they have either scrapped the section, or given you ground parole .. Nice to see you and I won't say a word 🙂
Neville,
Yes I do know
‘he’s somewhere near’…
and ‘despite’ myself,
I ‘really do, still care…’
No matter how much time has passed and whatever has happened in the past, a special love will always be there never to be forgotten.
Thank you for sharing your penned thoughts.
Laura🌻
how kind you are .. thank you for considering them Laura .. many thanks in fact .. 🙂 🌻
sometimes, we all need a friend
to whisper this hard truth's to us
for, if let to our own devices
we would neve claim, or accept
such a vulnerable state, instead
we would just withdraw, into ourselves
even more and refute, that needling thought
asking, maybe:
'What really matters most
is surely
That you know
*they're somewhere near
And the very
simple fact, despite yourself
it seems,
You really do, still care …… x'
(just another subtle gem of a write, my friend
again, wonderfully paced and effortlessly worded
so instinctively relatable)
.. Take it from me, thanking you L.B is always so much a bloomin pleasure sir 🙂
A simple fact never seems so simple.
simple as that ............ cheers M & M 🙂
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