Best seat in the house because you're worthy every once
To be blessed with a presence so pure we instinctively should renounce
All the information drowning out the beauty captured in time
As each moment passes by there is no rewind
Just a gift to start again and again until we die
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was written and the end of a beautiful day yesterday! Thank you all for the support on my last post, always appreciated with Much peace and respect.
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Comments3
not just clever but wise words methinks ... 🙂
Not wise enough to see the mistakes at the start but luckily none by the end! Now I can not even be bothered to edit it, on to the next!
Thanks for your time my friend
Great words Dan and a wonderful video, thank you for sharing them.
Andy
Thank you my friend for much support I hope you find some time on the green this summer.
'To be blessed with a presence
so pure
we instinctively: should renounce
All the information
drowning out the beauty, captured in time'..
Beautiful, dear Poet
a verse of wholehearted, poetic veracity!
thank yo for sharing, my friend
You always hit spot on for the emotional waves that drives me my friend.
Truly appreciate your time
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