Saxon Crow

Tell Me

Rain down your kisses in showers of love
And I will give you the horizon of my heart
Hold me like a spring time season
And I will sow you the seeds of forever
Share with me your thoughts and dreams
And I will conquer this world for you
Just tell me that you love me
And I will hear you as the Angel that you are
Remember our lives that are yet to be lived 
And i will show you all we had and were before
Tell me once again that I am yours 
And let this bond across time be ever more

Comments8

  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful loving write SC, may it always be so.

    Andy

    • Saxon Crow

      Thanks GF. Make it so!

    • Teddy.15

      That's just stunning Sax, never a dull moment from you and your muse. So romantic, deep and emotional.

    • L. B. Mek

      'Rain down your kisses in showers of love
      And I will give you the horizon of my heart'
      what a start
      to such - a wonderful read, dear poet

      • Saxon Crow

        Thanks LB. Much appreciated

      • Neil Higgins

        This is classical writing at its best SC.A huge pat on the back,at a magnificent use of words.

        • Saxon Crow

          Thanks Neil. You're, as ever, too kind

        • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

          Wow admirable use of weather imagery to ask in appealing words so creatively. Kudos!!

          Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

        • Neville



          reads like an anguished plea from one lover to ............................................. 🙂

        • Shantha Teldeniya

          This is a good poem.I like it SC.

        • Poetic Dan

          That it will be for sure, got me saying it half way through...... Dam I love this dude!

          • Saxon Crow

            I don't snog on a first date. You should know that

            • Poetic Dan

              That's good as the tape will make that difficult for a few day lol

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