The Essence of You
He wants to breathe
deeply
Every breath she exhales
To billow
and dance freely
Like those
wind filled silk sails ….
Like clouds
in a cloudless sky
Filled
with nothing but blue
He wants to breathe
deeply
The very essence of you …
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Author:
Neville (
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Nothing beats breathing love's essence like expressed in this tenderest of poetic confessions. A sigh of a read Nev..............x
Thank you so very bloomin much my dear lady Fay ... that'll do nicely and a little bit more .. an intoxicating review indeed .... 🙂 ............... x
like I breathe, your subtle poetry-in
at every opportunity
He a fanatic of love and intoxicating chemistry
and, I
well just a fan, but a proud one - till the end
my friend,
(just can't get enough of your scene depicting write's
in each one, we just plunge straight into the nucleus
core, at the heart of its poetic plot)
............ it just wouldn't be the same without you sir .... and for that, I thank you and truly my friend 🙂
Good write N. Now, I don't want to breathe in any effects of KP's botox! She's gonna melt in this heat. She will turn into a plastic blob! lol.
Better to be safe than sorry .. asbestos lip gloss might come in handy under those circumstances ... in the meantime, thank you Mr. O 🙂
Look, Orchi's hyperventilating. No I'm wrong. He's just high on KP.
Oopd, I nipped back to 'like' this. Was I too busy 'liking' my own poems? Was that why I was cut orf?!
I dunno .. but thanks again .................................................. 🙂
He'd be buggered if he had asthma.
Beautiful poem Nev
Too write he would & thank you for being so very kind to my little scribble 🙂
He’s in deep, just as I am of this astounding composition.
Yep ... thank you my friend and very kind of ya 🙂
Wow a superb poem, romantic and charming esp the ending line. Kudos for this engaging muse!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
........... thank you
Reads like a song....New venture, Nev?
time flies like the wind
fruit flies like bananas
reeds like marshes ...
I like so many others here, do like your visits DA ......................... 🙂
Not absolutely sure that's true Nev, but since they are going to get 'em anyway................................
Such wonderful words Neville, now in my memory.
Andy
wot a wonderful and safe place to be sir .. thanking you kindly .. 🙂
Lovely words ))
Bless you my friend ....... very muchly appreciated this fine sunny morn 🙂
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