The Essence of You

Neville

The Essence of You

 

He wants to breathe

deeply

Every breath she exhales

To billow

and dance freely

Like those

wind filled silk sails ….

Like clouds

in a cloudless sky

Filled

with nothing but blue

He wants to breathe

deeply

The very essence of you …

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 22nd, 2021 01:43
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 90
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments10

  • Fay Slimm.

    Nothing beats breathing love's essence like expressed in this tenderest of poetic confessions. A sigh of a read Nev..............x

    • Neville



      Thank you so very bloomin much my dear lady Fay ... that'll do nicely and a little bit more .. an intoxicating review indeed .... πŸ™‚ ............... x

    • L. B. Mek

      like I breathe, your subtle poetry-in
      at every opportunity
      He a fanatic of love and intoxicating chemistry
      and, I
      well just a fan, but a proud one - till the end
      my friend,
      (just can't get enough of your scene depicting write's
      in each one, we just plunge straight into the nucleus
      core, at the heart of its poetic plot)

      • Neville



        ............ it just wouldn't be the same without you sir .... and for that, I thank you and truly my friend πŸ™‚

      • orchidee

        Good write N. Now, I don't want to breathe in any effects of KP's botox! She's gonna melt in this heat. She will turn into a plastic blob! lol.

        • Neville



          Better to be safe than sorry .. asbestos lip gloss might come in handy under those circumstances ... in the meantime, thank you Mr. O πŸ™‚

          • Accidental Poet

            Look, Orchi's hyperventilating. No I'm wrong. He's just high on KP.

          • orchidee

            Oopd, I nipped back to 'like' this. Was I too busy 'liking' my own poems? Was that why I was cut orf?!

            • Neville



              I dunno .. but thanks again .................................................. πŸ™‚

            • Saxon Crow

              He'd be buggered if he had asthma.

              Beautiful poem Nev

              • Neville



                Too write he would & thank you for being so very kind to my little scribble πŸ™‚

              • SureshG

                He’s in deep, just as I am of this astounding composition.

                • Neville



                  Yep ... thank you my friend and very kind of ya πŸ™‚

                • 🐀s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                  Wow a superb poem, romantic and charming esp the ending line. Kudos for this engaging muse!

                  Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

                  • Neville



                    ........... thank you

                  • Doggerel Dave

                    Reads like a song....New venture, Nev?

                    • Neville



                      time flies like the wind
                      fruit flies like bananas
                      reeds like marshes ...
                      I like so many others here, do like your visits DA ......................... πŸ™‚

                      • Doggerel Dave

                        Not absolutely sure that's true Nev, but since they are going to get 'em anyway................................

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Such wonderful words Neville, now in my memory.

                        Andy

                        • Neville



                          wot a wonderful and safe place to be sir .. thanking you kindly .. πŸ™‚

                        • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

                          Lovely words ))

                          • Neville



                            Bless you my friend ....... very muchly appreciated this fine sunny morn πŸ™‚



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