Unbroken.
During the quiet at douse of day
where solitude lies in sandy lines
gone summer footprints of yours and my
making regain poignant meaning
in dusk-covered evening.
The beautiful secret of us still unbroken
can never be washed away
or be sunk into non-existence again
by tide or time nor can need once roused
belong to other than ours.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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'where solitude lies in sandy lines
gone summer footprints of yours and my'..
just these lines alone, flooded me
and overwhelmed those painstakingly built dams
to my regrets and bone-achingly, felt - hurts;
you've got teary eyes, thirsting: for a Time
now, long forgotten
for a presence by my side
now - long, since shed
thank you, dear Fay!
for reaffirming that magic of Poetry, into my reality
and allowing me
to break free, my shackles to reminiscing's: fears...
I am honoured that through reading Unbroken you have been able to break free L.B. --- time can never erase our past happy days and the magic of poetry will always help to bring gone love back.
for ever and always has such a splendid ring to it .... feels good too ..
what an impressive portfolio you have my friend ........... 🙂
Very true Nev. forever can love be the bolster that gets us through challenges eh - -- as for my collection of verses it is so neglected that I often cant find when I wrote about what -- -could do with a sexitary to keep me and my scribings in check.......x
Good write Fay.
Thanking you Orchi.
Those footprints in the sand, your words have forever etched in the mind, to be recalled when in solitude
And your in-put has etched ever further the words on love's foreverness dear Suresh - thank you so much for your fine review of Unbroken.
Unbroken as in love everlasting. Beautiful write Fay.
So very true Fay, I am walking along that same beach following my lovers footprints.
Andy
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