Purpose to express and reason to share

Poetic Dan

I maybe uneducated but have plenty of depth 

 

Can often mistake a word that should of been something else 

 

Even spell check and read aloud to still find out I'm misinformed 

 

To the point I feel degraded and just shouldn't write anymore 

 

If my words gets lost in translation not meaning what I want 

 

Yet actually the emotional attachments are still there 

 

For the purpose I express and the reason to share 

 

Finding balance to my own harmony and seeing who will appear 

 

As I can often go back to the shadows but this time my light is here 

 

Staying with no fear not wasting any energy of the atmosphere 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 22nd, 2021 11:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: I'll be honest I was so shocked to see the wrong word in my post yesterday and was not about to delete and correct 3 different platforms! Plus most importantly any comment made would go, so instead I used that inspiration and wrote another to not quit. Of course there's such a thing a mistakes but also always something to gain!
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  • SureshG

    Auto check, changed the word, I did not notice
    It’s OK! my friends at MPS without judging, will let me know it.

    • Poetic Dan

      I was so glad to know as its always in the way you say it not what is said!
      Thank you kindly my friend

    • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

      Yeah poet just share, without fear or pressure. And any mistakes can be edited. This poem itself was fantastic. Kudos!

      Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

      • Poetic Dan

        Always appreciate your time knowing I'm beginning to shine as to read and be intune with your poetry means in on the right track.

        Thank you again with much peace and respect

      • Saxon Crow

        Bro the amount of spelilgn errors I mkae is rilcousdi. Let it slide and let creativity flowwwww

        • Poetic Dan

          Yep something I do and some I don't but always on the slide to write and let it go!

          Thanks buddy

        • Laura🌻

          Dan,

          I’m glad you were inspired to keep on writing your poetry. We certainly don’t need a degree to
          ‘have plenty of depth’.

          Never feel ‘degraded’…
          Whenever you’re inspired to write, just do it! May that pen and light keep on guiding you.

          Laura🌻

          • Poetic Dan

            And may that reflect back to you for without your presence it does feel a tad gloom, then you come back and light up the room....

            Always appreciate your time my friend

          • Goldfinch60

            Just keep writing Dan your words let us into your life as ours do. You have found the light and all your words will move forward with love.

            Andy

            • Poetic Dan

              That door will and should stay forever up my man! Always doing what I can

              Cheers Andy

            • L. B. Mek

              'I *maybe* uneducated but have plenty of depth'..
              always admire your playfulness, and remember
              here at MPS you can always go back and edit your write
              without having to delete and repost, but
              that's not the point of your words today, my friend
              in fact, this is a battle cry you've penned
              for all of us, still attending that unending curriculum
              in our life graduate program, of humble wisdom;
              and so, we too
              will champion your defiant stance, dear poet
              and shout proudly, as one:
              'there's no spellcheck or poetry-form, police
              when we're connecting with those impassioned
              words of a writer, determined
              to infuse each syllable we read, with
              that instinctively recognisable quality
              of empathetic integrity
              and pure poetic majesty, to express
              relatable - comforting, emotional ques
              in those poetic safe spaces, between
              our inked letters'
              (personally, its a privilege to read
              your courageous heart
              in every work you pen, and your unending zeal
              to convey a little more hope
              and compassionate, appeasement
              into this chaotic world, we call home)

            • Poetic Dan

              Battle very with my pen, this has been forever my friend and with delight words from the depth of your soul each time! I'm guaranteed to grow old!

              A truly blessed in disguise, like a shield by my side! Believe me when I say we transmit a awesome vibe

              Keep being you buddy!



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