I maybe uneducated but have plenty of depth
Can often mistake a word that should of been something else
Even spell check and read aloud to still find out I'm misinformed
To the point I feel degraded and just shouldn't write anymore
If my words gets lost in translation not meaning what I want
Yet actually the emotional attachments are still there
For the purpose I express and the reason to share
Finding balance to my own harmony and seeing who will appear
As I can often go back to the shadows but this time my light is here
Staying with no fear not wasting any energy of the atmosphere
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I'll be honest I was so shocked to see the wrong word in my post yesterday and was not about to delete and correct 3 different platforms! Plus most importantly any comment made would go, so instead I used that inspiration and wrote another to not quit. Of course there's such a thing a mistakes but also always something to gain!
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Auto check, changed the word, I did not notice
It’s OK! my friends at MPS without judging, will let me know it.
I was so glad to know as its always in the way you say it not what is said!
Thank you kindly my friend
Yeah poet just share, without fear or pressure. And any mistakes can be edited. This poem itself was fantastic. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Always appreciate your time knowing I'm beginning to shine as to read and be intune with your poetry means in on the right track.
Thank you again with much peace and respect
Bro the amount of spelilgn errors I mkae is rilcousdi. Let it slide and let creativity flowwwww
Yep something I do and some I don't but always on the slide to write and let it go!
Thanks buddy
Dan,
I’m glad you were inspired to keep on writing your poetry. We certainly don’t need a degree to
‘have plenty of depth’.
Never feel ‘degraded’…
Whenever you’re inspired to write, just do it! May that pen and light keep on guiding you.
Laura🌻
And may that reflect back to you for without your presence it does feel a tad gloom, then you come back and light up the room....
Always appreciate your time my friend
Just keep writing Dan your words let us into your life as ours do. You have found the light and all your words will move forward with love.
Andy
That door will and should stay forever up my man! Always doing what I can
Cheers Andy
'I *maybe* uneducated but have plenty of depth'..
always admire your playfulness, and remember
here at MPS you can always go back and edit your write
without having to delete and repost, but
that's not the point of your words today, my friend
in fact, this is a battle cry you've penned
for all of us, still attending that unending curriculum
in our life graduate program, of humble wisdom;
and so, we too
will champion your defiant stance, dear poet
and shout proudly, as one:
'there's no spellcheck or poetry-form, police
when we're connecting with those impassioned
words of a writer, determined
to infuse each syllable we read, with
that instinctively recognisable quality
of empathetic integrity
and pure poetic majesty, to express
relatable - comforting, emotional ques
in those poetic safe spaces, between
our inked letters'
(personally, its a privilege to read
your courageous heart
in every work you pen, and your unending zeal
to convey a little more hope
and compassionate, appeasement
into this chaotic world, we call home)
Battle very with my pen, this has been forever my friend and with delight words from the depth of your soul each time! I'm guaranteed to grow old!
A truly blessed in disguise, like a shield by my side! Believe me when I say we transmit a awesome vibe
Keep being you buddy!
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