We invested in a hot tub because we work pretty hard and making home a holiday so happiness isn't far!
Yet all these things would be worthless if I had no one to share, let alone have the beauty of particles dancing in the air!
Not many memories are made from sleeping and always a little risk but try always to remember this...
A snail is a snail no matter how big or small, nothing ever stops them adventuring up to the highest heights of all.
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Okay there could be loads of mistakes in this because I've had about 4 hours sleep and when I came downstairs at 4am! My daughter made me jump out of my skin by not knowing she was at the window already watching! We laughed, got dazzled some more then jumped in the tub....she obviously crashed and I now put all this together and played for the first time my own tune in this one! Now to walk the mutts before they can have breakfast, the wicked never stop but at least the atmosphere lights up.lol. keep enjoying your weekend my poetic friends
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! “ a snail is a snail “ , “ the beauty of particles dancing in the air “ especially like those words .
Nice read 🙂
Always glad to see your smile and appreciation of your time.
Sharing your wonder of life with loved ones is so glorious, that is something I miss.
Andy
Bless, yes good times can never last but I guess it's what's keeps us As cool as you my friend!
Always appreciated
Good write Dan.
Snail-savers unite! On damp days pick up a snail crossing a pavement, and put it a garden or on some grass. It speeds their journey!
Crossing paths must be like crossing motorways for them.
I'll do the odd one or two but after that you have get on with your own stuff lol
But I hate hearing that 'crunch' underfoot - snail's hose trampled.
The snail in the hot tub
Now there's a thing
I guess the bubbles
Make his shell all gleam
If the bugger can make it in, I run a tight ship and my decks are all clean!
Again a blessing to receive your rhyming....
Thanks again for the smile
Who cares that the snail eats your garden, they are good to eat and though so small can climb that wall. The snail is both admirable and delicious and a worthy metaphor for ambitious. Thanks.
Ha ha ha, fantastic comment and glad you saw what I saw. Although I'd have to be very hungry to eat one for sure
Really appreciate your time!
Much peace and respect
I'm with yellowrose Dan .. and what a great use of words mate all threaded together to make one heck of a happy poem .... 🙂 🙂
Definitely some goodness has come my way or was it already there, I just had to say....
O I like that lol
Have a wonderful day
You are savoring every ounce of pleasure from the simplest of activity, so my hats off to you.
I hope you used that word on purpose my friend as it perfectly played and my hats off to you in return!
Always appreciated
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