From a Safe Distance Only

Neville

From a Safe Distance Only

 

Just listen to that silence

If you dare ..

I guarantee it’s like no

other sound

that you my love, shall

ever likely hear ..

A hollow resonation felt

both loud and crystal clear …

 

Not to mention deep ..

Yes, it hit him like a freight

train hard ..

Through the very soles

of both his feet ..

And what about all those

fingertips and nudges

You might well ask …

 

Of course, they hurt too

he would admit ..

Indeed it was those subtle

strokes and gentle prompts

That reminded

him so very much of lovers

long since passed

As yet tho from a safe distance only

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 24th, 2021 09:23
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Your poet's mind has versed the almost unattainable with this invitation to listen to silence as it resonates. Hurting yes but a reminder of love subtly calling again from the past. A gem again Nev.

    • Neville



      ................... am smiling Fay at the insight you yet again display .. warm hug on its way 🙂

      • Fay Slimm.

        Got it and thank you - warmer than warm now...........x

      • Doggerel Dave

        Darn! (or something) - Fay's solved your riddle, and I woz a going to tell you it woz too hard to solve....

        • Neville



          can't teach an old dog new tricks .. or summat .. cheers regardless, at least the mind was willing 🙂

        • Goldfinch60

          Silences can be so informative and so wonderful within our lives Neville.

          Andy

          • Neville



            shhhh ... dont say a word .. walls have ears n everyone will want a slice .. but just between you n me, I shall whisper only once ... thanks 🙂

          • L. B. Mek

            'he would admit ..

            Indeed it was those subtle
            strokes and gentle prompts
            That reminded
            him so very much of lovers
            long since passed'..
            reads like lyrics to a well written country music song
            that comes-on between, 4th and 5th drink messy slurps
            and has you swimming in yearned-for, memories
            till mercifully, by that lost shot of double Sambuca
            you bow - out, cold
            hoping, memory wipes are invented: by morning...
            Just such a great set of lines, my friend
            they hit home - arrowed
            as if I inked the words myself...
            (what greater quality can we expect
            from a cherished poem)
            thank you!

            • Neville



              I am well n truly indulged .. thank you my friend 🙂



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