Notice of absence from L. B. Mek
'fare ye well' kind friends
'fare ye well' kind friends
Mother Nature frees - her inhibition’s, breeze
swaying gracefully, with each whispered whimsy
her trumpet clouds – declare, loud-n-proud
foreshock of anticipation – pulsating, invitingly
tremors of expectant crescendo, undeniable
day of your birth, unmistakable;
from dawn’s, blank-page horizons of opportunity
till midnight’s, spotlight comforting-stars of serenity
a weeklong full-moon, hope-drunk party
welcoming, every birthstone colour: equally
Sakura petals celebrating, out-of-season blooming
cherished days, serenaded - by laughter’s harmony
© L. B. Mek
January 2019
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You have described the breeze ,clouds,dawn and dusk and the colours of nature aptly
thank you, appreciate you taking the time to comment and encourage
Well written, L.B.
As sweet as the girl withe the flowers in her hair. Good casting.
lol, I have a go-to talent agency
'google search',
genuinely think witnessing a Sakura tree blossom
is one of Nature's
exquisitely delicate scenes: of untainted beauty...
so glad you enjoyed the read Jerry, thank you!
there is absolutely nothing I dont like about your latest poem L.B ..
pleasing to the eye with great form flow throughout .. masterfully metaphored if ever there was such a thing and a super joyous celebratory message bathed in natures splendid hues ....... I ask ya, wots not to like ......................... N
you've just gone and made my blushing cheeks
match, those Sakura petal's shades of pink... lol
thank you my friend!
what an encouraging and comprehensive comment
you've got my poetic soul, gliding
with those trumpeting clouds 😳😵😁
There’s beauty everywhere within the nature’s course of life, in birth and yes also in death, for one nurtures the other, as do your words nurture us today.
Beautiful.
less comment than prose, elevated
to poetic nuances, as worded glucose
fuelling my courage, to climb
ever higher, on those challenging
mountainous peaks, of Artistry's dreams..
(thank you! dear Poet)
A very beautiful poem today LB.
lol, I have one in me - for every 100, or so...
me man, me stoic and me 💪
'what, there's a flu bug, going around you say?' 😱 ... lol
(sorry for my silly antics, dear poet
thank you for taking the time to encourage and support
glad you could connect with my scribble)
Very good words Mek, may those cherished days be forever with you.
Andy
I blame you Andy
it's all those 'walking with nature' poems
you share, that's influenced me...
thank you, my friend
Ok I’ll take the blame Mek, I have broad shoulders.
Andy
Beautiful poem Mek .. lovely to read ))
thank you! really appreciate
you scrolling back, to find
how very kind, dear Poet
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