L. B. Mek

Invitation, to fireworks: of fireflies



 

 

Mother Nature frees - her inhibition’s, breeze

swaying gracefully, with each whispered whimsy

 

her trumpet clouds – declare, loud-n-proud

foreshock of anticipation – pulsating, invitingly

 

tremors of expectant crescendo, undeniable

day of your birth, unmistakable;

 

from dawn’s, blank-page horizons of opportunity

till midnight’s, spotlight comforting-stars of serenity

 

a weeklong full-moon, hope-drunk party

welcoming, every birthstone colour: equally

 

Sakura petals celebrating, out-of-season blooming

cherished days, serenaded - by laughter’s harmony

 

© L. B. Mek

January 2019

Comments9

  • Thekkinkkattil

    You have described the breeze ,clouds,dawn and dusk and the colours of nature aptly

    • L. B. Mek

      thank you, appreciate you taking the time to comment and encourage

    • Teddy.15

      from dawn’s, blank-page horizons of opportunity

      till midnight’s, spotlight comforting-stars of serenity.

      If not perfection I wouldn't know what is! And a very happy birthday to ed. Loved your title with every last line of imagery L.B as I always do.

      • L. B. Mek

        how very kind, always such a warm and reassuring feeling
        to read one of your overtly generous comments
        dear Poetess, thank you!
        sincerely..
        (may I never know the dull monotones, of perfection
        always, do I wish
        to be striving, searching: hoping
        that something better - awaits
        that next syllable of poetic ink's
        daredevil, scuba diving! lol)

        • Teddy.15

          LoL X

        • Neil Higgins

          Lovely words LB and superbly constructed.

          • L. B. Mek

            Happy Birthday Neil! (MPS notice)
            hope you have a great day, dear poet
            and thank you, for your supportive comment

            • Neil Higgins

              Thank you my friend.Another year older and wiser.
              Nah 🤭

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Well written, L.B.
              As sweet as the girl withe the flowers in her hair. Good casting.

              • L. B. Mek

                lol, I have a go-to talent agency
                'google search',
                genuinely think witnessing a Sakura tree blossom
                is one of Nature's
                exquisitely delicate scenes: of untainted beauty...
                so glad you enjoyed the read Jerry, thank you!

              • Neville


                there is absolutely nothing I dont like about your latest poem L.B ..

                pleasing to the eye with great form flow throughout .. masterfully metaphored if ever there was such a thing and a super joyous celebratory message bathed in natures splendid hues ....... I ask ya, wots not to like ......................... N

                • L. B. Mek

                  you've just gone and made my blushing cheeks
                  match, those Sakura petal's shades of pink... lol
                  thank you my friend!
                  what an encouraging and comprehensive comment
                  you've got my poetic soul, gliding
                  with those trumpeting clouds 😳😵😁

                • SureshG

                  There’s beauty everywhere within the nature’s course of life, in birth and yes also in death, for one nurtures the other, as do your words nurture us today.

                  • L. B. Mek

                    Beautiful.
                    less comment than prose, elevated
                    to poetic nuances, as worded glucose
                    fuelling my courage, to climb
                    ever higher, on those challenging
                    mountainous peaks, of Artistry's dreams..
                    (thank you! dear Poet)

                  • Saxon Crow

                    A very beautiful poem today LB.

                    • L. B. Mek

                      lol, I have one in me - for every 100, or so...
                      me man, me stoic and me 💪
                      'what, there's a flu bug, going around you say?' 😱 ... lol
                      (sorry for my silly antics, dear poet
                      thank you for taking the time to encourage and support
                      glad you could connect with my scribble)

                    • The Uneducated O.A.P

                      Every lines a great line, right proper stuff.

                      • L. B. Mek

                        awesome, just a great feeling
                        to pen something you enjoyed, reading
                        my friend, thank you!

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Very good words Mek, may those cherished days be forever with you.

                        Andy

                        • L. B. Mek

                          I blame you Andy
                          it's all those 'walking with nature' poems
                          you share, that's influenced me...
                          thank you, my friend

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Ok I’ll take the blame Mek, I have broad shoulders.

                            Andy



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