the owl and the.....

dusk arising

the owl and the puddy tat
brewed some tea
in a beautiful pea green pot
it seemed so funny
to a nearby bunny
who simply had started to gloat

 

they wailed at play
moulding lumps of clay
into bowls of colour and hue
and silvery spoons
reflecting the moon
for to eat of soup the next day

 

the children all smiled
for mile upon mile
as owl and tat wandered on
in a blustery breeze
beneath liquorice trees
to the place they decided to stay

 

oh puddy dear tat
said owl stating facts
youre the greediest puddy i know
youve been stuffing with cakes
till the hour got late
and all i hear now are your farts

 

so puddy replied
with a glint in her eyes
oh owl in your feathered hoot suit
ive noticed you dribble
when your head starts to swivvel
you really could do with a scrub

 

as the sun went down
on this pair of clowns
and their fans had all gone home
owls head on tat's chest
they laid down to rest
bestest friends at the end of the day

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 28th, 2021 05:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: inspired by Teddys post today i thought Id write some nonsense whilst pinching a couple of well known characters from Eddy Lear.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Caring dove

    Brilliant writing , dusk 🙂 I enjoyed the fun read .,

    You are good at poetry ..

    Nicely expressed !

  • Jerry Reynolds

    Fine write, Dusk.
    Best coffee read of the day.

  • Saxon Crow

    Oh dear oh dear

  • orchidee

    A bestest poem dusk.

  • Neville


    Nobody .. not no one aint gonna love this DA ...

    Read on me phone in the garden while picking blackberries and the sweetest goose-gogs I've ever tasted .......

    Made me chuckle into me truckle so ya did squire ...... 🙂

  • flyingfish

    Nice fun read. Cheers

  • Fay Slimm.

    Oh dozens of readers will be taken back to their owl and puddy cat days after reading this tale of new adventures dear Dusk.........set me agiggling it did and loved it to bits.

  • Goldfinch60

    Great fun write d a.

    Andy

  • L. B. Mek

    sublime!
    a wonderful dedication
    captured the playfulness and wholesome message
    of the original, while adding your distinct quality
    as a poet Dusk,
    (really liked the last verse)
    thank you!



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