Almost a Very Nearly
Waiting for the tide to turn
Bobbing up and down
Bow and belly kissed by waves
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Neville (
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Intriguing yet describing a timid bather methinks -- did you make it in and really get wet ?...............x
maybe my recent scribbles have been a little too abstract ... nevertheless I think your take is seriously cool ................................................................................................................................ this was inspired by my watching the little boats in our local harbour this very mane ..........................:)
Keep up the good work, Fay – you solve Nev’s enigmatic little ‘scribbles’ and restore balance to the world and my sanity. Kudos.
Neville – Well dun once more, Sir
Oooh - I stand corrected Nev - -- never thought of just boats - ha - -- serves me right for imagining too much...............x
no need Fay .. I love the way ya stand regardless .. and anyway, we scribblers need a bit of give n take dont we .. Oh' and I thought your take was not only on target but probably way better than mine .............................. 🙂
Now where's the old dog gone ... it seems that Fay has the magic touch innit sir .............. cheers Dave 🙂
De - efinitely, Nev - I trust Fay's judgement, and the problem (one way or another) is resolved........
Just had a another read Nev of this well-captured gem and can now see those boats rocking serenely before the storm breaks as is supposed when wind changes - - hope 'tho' you find them bobbing along just the same tomorrow my lubbly..............x
Hope so too Fay ... tonight the storms are gonna hit us so bloomin hard ........................ Thank goodness Michael Fish retired and we had plenty of notice ...................... and thanks again me lovely 🙂 x
been out in choppy rivers have we?
almost, can be a wonderful word of relief
or a lifetime's nightmare of regret,
guess it all, rests
on a flip of luck's - temperamental tide
if you will..
another fun shorty, my friend
thank you
Thank you L.B ......................... Neville 🙂
Waves tickling at the bow, she'll have her way, making way when that tides floats her.
just been down to the harbour again this very mane .. and she is now riding the waves sir ......... cheers n truly 🙂
Good write N. Beer belly?!
.............. am loosing mine even as I wave bye bye ............ thanks tho for noticing Mr O .. 🙂
aah yes, the sea. A moody las she can be N. But source of many a story told. 😉
Aye aye Cap'n AP ....................... so many tales told .. n so many yet to be said .. jot em down quick coz ya a long time brown bread ...................................... 🙂
impudent butterfly
sits on kings crown
might that be a moth aloft that shiny yellow circular thing .. nah tis but a halo ..
The wonder of the sea can intrigue us all Neville.
Andy
.................... indubitably .. it always does it for me .. cheers Andy 🙂
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