Almost a Very Nearly

Neville

Almost a Very Nearly

 

Waiting for the tide to turn

Bobbing up and down

Bow and belly kissed by waves

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 29th, 2021 03:04
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 45
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments7

  • Fay Slimm.

    Intriguing yet describing a timid bather methinks -- did you make it in and really get wet ?...............x

    • Neville



      maybe my recent scribbles have been a little too abstract ... nevertheless I think your take is seriously cool ................................................................................................................................ this was inspired by my watching the little boats in our local harbour this very mane ..........................:)

      • Doggerel Dave

        Keep up the good work, Fay – you solve Nev’s enigmatic little ‘scribbles’ and restore balance to the world and my sanity. Kudos.
        Neville – Well dun once more, Sir

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      • L. B. Mek

        been out in choppy rivers have we?
        almost, can be a wonderful word of relief
        or a lifetime's nightmare of regret,
        guess it all, rests
        on a flip of luck's - temperamental tide
        if you will..
        another fun shorty, my friend
        thank you

        • Neville



          Thank you L.B ......................... Neville 🙂

        • dusk arising

          Waves tickling at the bow, she'll have her way, making way when that tides floats her.

          • Neville



            just been down to the harbour again this very mane .. and she is now riding the waves sir ......... cheers n truly 🙂

          • orchidee

            Good write N. Beer belly?!

            • Neville



              .............. am loosing mine even as I wave bye bye ............ thanks tho for noticing Mr O .. 🙂

            • Accidental Poet

              aah yes, the sea. A moody las she can be N. But source of many a story told. 😉

              • Neville



                Aye aye Cap'n AP ....................... so many tales told .. n so many yet to be said .. jot em down quick coz ya a long time brown bread ...................................... 🙂

              • Jerry Reynolds

                impudent butterfly
                sits on kings crown

                • Neville



                  might that be a moth aloft that shiny yellow circular thing .. nah tis but a halo ..

                • Goldfinch60

                  The wonder of the sea can intrigue us all Neville.

                  Andy

                  • Neville



                    .................... indubitably .. it always does it for me .. cheers Andy 🙂



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