Saxon Crow

Perspectives


He loves me
I can tell by the look in his eyes
He loves me not
I can tell by the tiny little lies
He loves me
He makes me so complete 
He loves me not
I feel empty in defeat
He loves me
I'm so alive whenever he's near
He loves me not
It would make no difference if I wasn't here
He loves me
He writes me poetry everyday
He loves me not
I get a text to ask what's for dinner today
He loves me
But he needs to be strong
He loves me not
It won't be long until he's gone
He loves me
And now he is here
He loves me not
Which means no more tears

Comments11

  • Goldfinch60

    That love we have for others is always the strongest feeling we have and those we love are so very special to us SC.

    Andy

  • Teddy.15

    He loves you, Yeh yeh yeh, have a wonderful weekend, my heart feels truly warm for you Great bit of word on play. Biggest hugs to you both. I haven't been home in so long.

  • yellowrose

    Good poem ... nice words 🙂

  • orchidee

    A fine write SC.

  • Neil Higgins

    Very true SC.Had to read through several times,to make sure I understood the meaning.But I have.

  • L. B. Mek

    sorry but this was physically hard to read
    my four eyes kept on getting lost,
    couldn't find my way out of that
    'Me and Not'
    spiralling descent into mind boggling confusion,
    guess I'm just old, like that
    I'll just let the petals: sing my fate... lol
    a quirky and fun read, thanks for sharing dear Poet

    • Saxon Crow

      No problem. I'll make it easier. Imagine two women talking about the same man.

    • Neil Higgins

      Was just going to say that SC but you beat me to it 😁

      • Saxon Crow

        Top of the class you go Neil!

      • Accidental Poet

        Is this about Orchi? 🤣

        • Saxon Crow

          You guessed! Lol

          • Accidental Poet

            I knew it. Had Orchi written all over it. 😜

          • aDarkerMind

            most impressed...
            top of the class for you as well.

          • Jerry Reynolds

            Good write, S.C.
            Love has a life span. Thankfully, after many wakes, I found one longer than mine.

            • Saxon Crow

              Glad to hear it Jerry 🙂

            • dusk arising

              Describes the cycle of a womans thoughts rather well, but theyre not often so orderly.

              • Saxon Crow

                The poem is about two women and one man Dusk



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