Croquet At Broadwas.

Goldfinch60



I arrive at the club,

Broadwas was the place,

A place I had never been

Looking forward to the day,

The day where croquet leads the way.

I look across the lawns

Seeing the beauty of the finely cut grass.

I look around and see the wonder,

The wonder of the green hills

Surrounding the lawns.

The glory of Nature all around,

It will be a marvellous day.

 

 

At the end of the competition

I look back on the day with delight,

Winning more than I lost

On these elegant lawns,

That were wonderful on which to play.

Looking back though

The matches were so good

But that was not important,

It was the glory of the day,

A day of competition,

Of meeting new people

As we chatted with humour,

Humour, kindness and respect.

I left the club feeling so well

The day I had was wonderful,

And will one day

Go back and enjoy it again.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 30th, 2021 01:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: I played in a croquet competition yesterday and had a wonderful day.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 24
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • Neville

    Seems like a good day was had by all

    it aint all in the winning, is it .. not by a long way ......................................... ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Goldfinch60

      It certainly was a good day.

      Yes the day itself was so special although winning is important the wonder of the day was so much more important.

      Andy

    • Doggerel Dave

      Beset by constant propaganda from your good self, I decided to investigate this croquet from the comfort of my chair. Does look fun - do you play the full English version or the Golf? One of the vids had very rough grass, yet I imagined your playing surface to be more like a bowls setup as per your piece.
      ' Glad you had a good day.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Dave, I play Golf Croquet normally but I do also try and play Association Croquet once a week.

        I have played in long grass on occasion, I lost a ball in it once but croquet clubs have bowls like lawns.

        Andy

      • Saxon Crow

        Glad you had a lovely day. You sound very at peace with yourself GF

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you SC, yes I am in a good place in my life.

          Andy

        • orchidee

          A fine day and write Gold.

        • L. B. Mek

          there's something comforting in sharing other's depiction
          of unbridled joy, worded easily relatable to digest
          and ever so unassumingly nuanced, to appreciate..
          thanks Andy

          • Goldfinch60

            So kind Mek, thank you.

            Andy

          • Jerry Reynolds

            Good read, Andy.
            Havenโ€™t played in years. Loved the game.
            Set a court up in our back yard back in the day,
            neighbors came was a wonderful time.
            You inspired me Andy. Going to speak with the Land Lord
            and see if he will let us introduce croquet.

            • Goldfinch60

              I hope that you can paly it again Jerry, it is a great game.

              Andy

            • dusk arising

              Its marvellous what a bit of socialising can do.

              • Goldfinch60

                So very true d a.

                Andy

              • Accidental Poet

                With such a wonderful day, all players were the winners. Played a few times when I was a kid. Many moons ago. Glad you all had such a great day. ๐Ÿ˜‰

                • Goldfinch60

                  True AP, we were all winners on the day.

                  Andy



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