I think about it, about it all.
A long time of me trying to reach me and I’m ignoring the call.
I wanna forget I wanna be a good guy with a powerful mind but now days seems we need a gun at our hip.
But I live behind a smile that I think kills hate, so typical and hypocritical cause the the same smile I give the world the one looking back at my and I hate all things fake.
It’s me vs me and l cant forget, however easy to forgive others.
I see through a lot of lies and just roll with the punches like kids scared we’re all just hiding under the covers.
Im a wreck I’m alone in space I’m just every where like these words just all over the place.
I hear them talk I listen and I try to put myself in their position.
However I wake up and there’s in empty place in my chest there was a demolition.
Fake smile causes crapped jaws and sometimes I need to be alone but company doesn’t feel so bad can I just press pause.
The one thing things can’t do it stop I just need a second.
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Author:
Dakota (Pseudonym) (
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Comments1
there is real potential in your writing
(in my humble opinion)
it just, feels like
you're writing these lines
as if, you're talking to yourself
and sadly
we, the rest of the world
aren't: clever enough, to understand
your meaning
unless, you make it a little clearer for us
'But I live behind a smile
that I think kills hate,
so typical and hypocritical
cause the the same smile I give the world
the one looking back at my
and I hate all things fake.'
still, thank you for sharing
an interesting read
(this was meant to be an encouraging comment
please, forgive me
if you find it rude or offensive, in any way;
just in case: I's gladly apologise, sincerely
in advance)
No worries brotha I appreciate the feed back. Thank you
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