Magic Bead

Neville

Magic Bead

 

Framed as it was like that

all but lost

between the folds of those

sweet satin curtains

Now long since drawn

perfectly centered, pulsing

and brightly ..

Yes my friend that is where

he found her magic bead

The one he traced around

ever so lightly

and she, for such a long time

would have him believe

was misplaced

and might never be found …

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 2nd, 2021 13:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: no beads were hurt during the making ......................................... :)
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  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • orchidee

    Good write N. Might I swoon? lol.

    • Neville



      without a doubt ... but before you hit the deck .. thanks 🙂

      • orchidee

        I best stay with beads on me Rosary, if I was Roman Catholic (but I'm not!).

      • Jerry Reynolds

        A lot to pierce the imagination here, Neville.

        • Neville



          I wanna know why if it aint broke .. so many try to find a reason to mend it ....... cheers Jez my friend 🙂

          • Jerry Reynolds

            Yep! Too damn much fixin is a problem.

          • Fay Slimm.

            The finding would bring about a magical change to one who made curtains stay so tightly drawn - - methinks - - well maybe..........x

            • Neville



              Bless you dear Fay .............................................................. n truly I say ....................................... N 🙂 x

            • Doggerel Dave

              When magic bead found and appropriately revered, the energy released.........

              • Neville



                .................................................... phenomenal 🙂

              • Goldfinch60

                That magic bead is so important.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  ................................................. You bet 'cha ............. Cheers Andy 🙂

                • L. B. Mek

                  A great shorty, my friend!
                  purity of genuine sensuality
                  is fast becoming, as archaic
                  as integrity
                  in a modern couples: sincerity of intimacy...
                  (In fantastical Oriental folk-lore
                  there are stories, surrounding
                  Fox's, pure white and empowered
                  with multiple tails;
                  each tail, representing - equivalence
                  to a Cat's nine lives
                  in Western society folk-lore,
                  and in most of the stories
                  however diverse the details,
                  the Fox usually ends-up sharing
                  its Bead - of Life
                  with a lucky human,
                  Trusting: its very existence
                  with another)
                  ain't it all, just beautiful
                  when written down in Poetic
                  black n white...
                  (thank you, for sharing
                  your Subtle - unassuming, Brilliance
                  with us dear Poet!)

                  • Neville



                    cor blimey guv'nor .. how bloomin kind is that .. and he gets to learn summat new to boot .. thanks a million my friend ............................................... N 🙂

                  • SureshG

                    I sense her tease, just as your words tease our senses

                    • Neville



                      thank you my friend ... very much appreciated I assure ya ... 🙂

                    • Dove

                      Mystery beads, satin curtains, such elegant objects to behold, but the real beauty is how you spin words, or rather weave them ! More so like a gem , she hid her valuables until she deemed him worthy of discovery

                      • Neville



                        she can read him like a book and ........................ bless you my friend .......................................... if only 🙂



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